darkcornerinthecloset's Songwriting Journal

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 11:52 AM

wtf? your FIRST poem and I didn't see it?!!? You ALWAYS show me your poems, even the one that called me a demon!!!!???? again wtf?!

FaSho · 02-23-2009, 01:24 PM

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Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

I have nothing to say worth hearing

In my life I have never heard an opening line as truthful as this.

~~ninaNirvana~~ · 02-23-2009, 01:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Schizotypic

I feel like you are writting about experiancing struggle constantly.

We all do in a way..but I see what you are saying. I think it simply may need some more metaphorical language...there is a lot of feeling already albeit 'depressing'. This might make a good grunge song if executed properly.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 03:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Feign

And to the OP, All I'm going to say is that I have more sympathy for the person the speaker (I'm assuming is you) is yelling at..

I think that would be me because I was being an a**hole to her but I'm not entirely sure.

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 03:06 PM

Is this one about your evil bitch parents?

**Janszoon** · 02-23-2009, 03:08 PM

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Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

Who I Am

Sean Penn?

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 03:09 PM

I wish you still felt that way

~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ · 02-23-2009, 06:36 PM

could someone just put an end to this stuff already

FaSho · 02-23-2009, 07:08 PM

could someone just put an end to this stuff already[2]

This is just annoying bullsh*t

deep_and_depressing · 02-23-2009, 07:24 PM

That's mean

02-23-2009, 11:52 AM	#31 (permalink)
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