Elvon's Songwriting Journal

Trauma · 05-13-2009, 11:02 PM

Awful.
It sounds like a generic rock song if that's what you're going for.

Sneer · 05-13-2009, 11:05 PM

Trauma = Snickers?

And, the lyrics are abysmal, it looks like a poor Jonas Brothers song. Was it in fact a joke?

Trauma · 05-13-2009, 11:07 PM

Yeah, HiHelloheythere!

Sneer · 05-13-2009, 11:08 PM

Nice to see you still knocking about buddy!

Trauma · 05-13-2009, 11:18 PM

Thanks, you too.

Guybrush · 05-16-2009, 07:17 AM

Elvon, your threads have been merged into one.

Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html

Send me or another mod a PM with a link to this thread if you want us to change the name.

05-13-2009, 11:02 PM	#31 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Awful. It sounds like a generic rock song if that's what you're going for. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

05-13-2009, 11:05 PM	#32 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,430	Trauma = Snickers? And, the lyrics are abysmal, it looks like a poor Jonas Brothers song. Was it in fact a joke? __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show

05-13-2009, 11:07 PM	#33 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Yeah, HiHelloheythere! __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

05-13-2009, 11:08 PM	#34 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,430	Nice to see you still knocking about buddy! __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show

05-13-2009, 11:18 PM	#35 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Thanks, you too. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

05-16-2009, 07:17 AM	#36 (permalink)
Guybrush Juicious Maximus III Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Scabb Island Posts: 6,525	Elvon, your threads have been merged into one. Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html Send me or another mod a PM with a link to this thread if you want us to change the name. __________________ Something Completely Different