Elvon's Songwriting Journal

Elvon · 02-10-2009, 08:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aveneficus

elvon, you are not very talented from what ive read so far.
and this is not good because it is just you whining about everyone hating you.
bland. boring. repititive.

Edit: And do not call me kid, you're thirteen years old.

Right.. Lol ^^

aveneficus · 02-10-2009, 03:13 PM

Okay so if you don't want any constructive criticism, why are you here?
And if this song isn't just about you being a self indulged emo kid, please, do tell me what it's about.

Elvon · 02-11-2009, 09:29 AM

Well that's not really me in the song!

Shoe · 02-11-2009, 04:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elvon

Well that's not really me in the song!

Then replace all the pronouns 'cause people aren't going to like you son.

Elvon · 05-07-2009, 02:02 PM

After all things that I made
I just knew I had mistakes
But you wont forgive me again
But that's all I want from you now! ..

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!

I just walked by all over again
And I saw you going through the plane
Wanted to be far away from me
Dont you ever leave me alone.. Again!!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!

Comment please! Im having a Lyrics competition soon and I need to make one before the week ends. (:Tell me if it's not good so I can make another one ^^

Elvon · 05-09-2009, 02:20 PM

Hello, Id like to make a new band on Music Banter. I know it seems strange, but I'd like to get like 2 people.. Release new songs on here in lyrics. Ill need a Rock Band!

Stone Birds · 05-09-2009, 03:38 PM

i support you fully, but jackhammer or another moderator is going to close this thread pretty soon because self-promotion and advertising aern't allowed, sorry dude, wish i could help.

Arya Stark · 05-13-2009, 09:59 AM

I tried to find the best in the lyrics, but I couldn't find anything that would win a competition. >.> Good try, though. A for effort.

Elvon · 05-13-2009, 10:30 AM

Yeah, the competition got cancelled though :P

Arya Stark · 05-13-2009, 11:50 AM

Good. It's never good to try to rush inspiration.

02-10-2009, 03:13 PM	#22 (permalink)
aveneficus Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Cincinnati, OH Posts: 44	Okay so if you don't want any constructive criticism, why are you here? And if this song isn't just about you being a self indulged emo kid, please, do tell me what it's about. __________________ If dreams are like movies, then memories are films about ghosts

05-07-2009, 02:02 PM	#25 (permalink)
Elvon Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Uppsala/Sweden Posts: 62	My New Rock Song " Never Fall Down " After all things that I made I just knew I had mistakes But you wont forgive me again But that's all I want from you now! .. Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again! I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah! Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again! I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!! I just walked by all over again And I saw you going through the plane Wanted to be far away from me Dont you ever leave me alone.. Again!! Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again! I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah! Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again! I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!! Comment please! Im having a Lyrics competition soon and I need to make one before the week ends. (:Tell me if it's not good so I can make another one ^^

05-09-2009, 02:20 PM	#26 (permalink)
Elvon Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Uppsala/Sweden Posts: 62	Making New Band! Hello, Id like to make a new band on Music Banter. I know it seems strange, but I'd like to get like 2 people.. Release new songs on here in lyrics. Ill need a Rock Band!

02-11-2009, 09:29 AM	#23 (permalink)
Elvon Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Uppsala/Sweden Posts: 62	Well that's not really me in the song!

05-09-2009, 03:38 PM	#27 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	i support you fully, but jackhammer or another moderator is going to close this thread pretty soon because self-promotion and advertising aern't allowed, sorry dude, wish i could help.

05-13-2009, 10:30 AM	#29 (permalink)
Elvon Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Uppsala/Sweden Posts: 62	Yeah, the competition got cancelled though :P