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Elvon 02-10-2009 07:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aveneficus (Post 593216)
elvon, you are not very talented from what ive read so far.
and this is not good because it is just you whining about everyone hating you.
bland. boring. repititive.

Edit: And do not call me kid, you're thirteen years old.

Right.. Lol ^^

aveneficus 02-10-2009 02:13 PM

Okay so if you don't want any constructive criticism, why are you here?
And if this song isn't just about you being a self indulged emo kid, please, do tell me what it's about.

Elvon 02-11-2009 08:29 AM

Well that's not really me in the song!

Shoe 02-11-2009 03:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elvon (Post 594515)
Well that's not really me in the song!

Then replace all the pronouns 'cause people aren't going to like you son.

Elvon 05-07-2009 01:02 PM

My New Rock Song " Never Fall Down "
 
After all things that I made
I just knew I had mistakes
But you wont forgive me again
But that's all I want from you now! ..


Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!

I just walked by all over again
And I saw you going through the plane
Wanted to be far away from me
Dont you ever leave me alone.. Again!!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!










Comment please! Im having a Lyrics competition soon and I need to make one before the week ends. (:Tell me if it's not good so I can make another one ^^

Elvon 05-09-2009 01:20 PM

Making New Band!
 
Hello, Id like to make a new band on Music Banter. I know it seems strange, but I'd like to get like 2 people.. Release new songs on here in lyrics. Ill need a Rock Band!

Stone Birds 05-09-2009 02:38 PM

i support you fully, but jackhammer or another moderator is going to close this thread pretty soon because self-promotion and advertising aern't allowed, sorry dude, wish i could help.

Arya Stark 05-13-2009 08:59 AM

I tried to find the best in the lyrics, but I couldn't find anything that would win a competition. >.> Good try, though. A for effort.

Elvon 05-13-2009 09:30 AM

Yeah, the competition got cancelled though :P

Arya Stark 05-13-2009 10:50 AM

Good. It's never good to try to rush inspiration.


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