poem i wrote,what u think? (Hang)

07phoenix · 01-29-2009, 10:24 PM

seasons change.As the weather changes from hot to cold.leaves fall from trees.The further apart we are,feels like we are drifting away from each other.thats the last thing i want to happen.tears fall from my cheek.my heart beats faster and faster.counting the days till your in my arms again.i lay awake at night.thoughts of you roll in the back of my mind.hoping the feelings that you have for me never change.

**Janszoon** · 01-29-2009, 11:22 PM

I think that's more of a paragraph than a poem.

01-29-2009, 10:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
07phoenix Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: somewhere Posts: 8	poem i wrote,what u think? seasons change.As the weather changes from hot to cold.leaves fall from trees.The further apart we are,feels like we are drifting away from each other.thats the last thing i want to happen.tears fall from my cheek.my heart beats faster and faster.counting the days till your in my arms again.i lay awake at night.thoughts of you roll in the back of my mind.hoping the feelings that you have for me never change.

01-29-2009, 11:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	I think that's more of a paragraph than a poem. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm