B.i.p.o.l.a.r (lyrics, electronic, hardcore)

Raust · 01-29-2009, 05:01 PM

I wrote a song for my band. Here are the lyrics. Feel free to criticize. Take note that this is a short song. I intended this to be quick and to the point.

B.I.P.O.L.A.R

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

looking at you today
makes me just want to say

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

ruining peoples lives
here you go choke on knives

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you ar
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

PerfectRandomness · 01-29-2009, 07:19 PM

yeah pretty short... the verses are pretty meaningless and calling someone bipolar? just weird. do you know what that is?

Wifey Boozer · 02-01-2009, 07:01 PM

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Originally Posted by raust

...and to the point.

...What point?

Double X · 02-01-2009, 07:36 PM

It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.

kthedrummer · 02-01-2009, 07:55 PM

I am bi-polar and I can't run my own life. Ow..it says ruin...I bet this is about someone you know and hate who is bi-polar.

Gazz_Evans · 02-02-2009, 03:19 PM

sounds like your just making fun of people with mental problems, kinda harsh perhaps?

Lutherfish · 02-05-2009, 08:10 PM

I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song.
Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria.
If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be unnecessarily insulting.

Frozen Angel · 02-06-2009, 03:19 AM

uhm...this doesn't really have much of a point at all... But I wish that I was a manic depressant, I'd get lots of **** done. Now that would be an awesome disease, I'd have super powers and not have to sleep. Ok so that was the thought provoke that it gave me....dum di dum...oh look a squirrel...I have sqirrels in my back yard. There is no point to what I am typing right now...so...yeah....time to go read something else.

**Janszoon** · 02-06-2009, 04:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Double X

It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.

I imagined Devo-ish electronic music while I was reading those lyrics. I think it would actually work pretty well in that context.

Roemilca · 02-06-2009, 03:03 PM

The first thing that popped into my head while I read those lyrics was MSI.

01-29-2009, 05:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
Raust Music Addict Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,411	B.i.p.o.l.a.r I wrote a song for my band. Here are the lyrics. Feel free to criticize. Take note that this is a short song. I intended this to be quick and to the point. B.I.P.O.L.A.R b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you are bipolar bipolar bipolar looking at you today makes me just want to say b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you are bipolar bipolar bipolar ruining peoples lives here you go choke on knives b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you ar bipolar bipolar bipolar Last edited by Raust; 01-29-2009 at 05:07 PM.

01-29-2009, 07:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
PerfectRandomness Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 14	yeah pretty short... the verses are pretty meaningless and calling someone bipolar? just weird. do you know what that is? __________________ I unlit the light to embrace the dark To be near but not to turn into you my darling Forever we're lost in our souls' storm Reflections of each other's faults

02-01-2009, 07:55 PM	#5 (permalink)
kthedrummer King of the Idiots Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: The free love freeway Posts: 262	I am bi-polar and I can't run my own life. Ow..it says ruin...I bet this is about someone you know and hate who is bi-polar. __________________ Your brain has the shell on it.

02-06-2009, 03:03 PM	#10 (permalink)
Roemilca Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Virginia, USA Posts: 412	The first thing that popped into my head while I read those lyrics was MSI. __________________

02-01-2009, 07:36 PM	#4 (permalink)
Double X sleepe Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: boston Posts: 1,140	It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.

02-02-2009, 03:19 PM	#6 (permalink)
Gazz_Evans Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 9	sounds like your just making fun of people with mental problems, kinda harsh perhaps?

02-05-2009, 08:10 PM	#7 (permalink)
Lutherfish Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 20	I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song. Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria. If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be unnecessarily insulting.

02-06-2009, 03:19 AM	#8 (permalink)
Frozen Angel Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 41	uhm...this doesn't really have much of a point at all... But I wish that I was a manic depressant, I'd get lots of **** done. Now that would be an awesome disease, I'd have super powers and not have to sleep. Ok so that was the thought provoke that it gave me....dum di dum...oh look a squirrel...I have sqirrels in my back yard. There is no point to what I am typing right now...so...yeah....time to go read something else.