Lyrics

Rob-Boy · 02-21-2009, 04:11 PM

wow. why don't you call it "Rhyming couplets In Menopause"?

It's overly emotional, and it's got no flow.

Schizotypic · 02-21-2009, 07:25 PM

I don't know who jamie is, but I think it's time to let go.
It's probably mostly your fault anyway, and I didn't even read the whole song.

Trendkiller · 01-10-2010, 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

Well, i suppose you call yourself trend killer for a reason. but i have to agree that rap generally, GENERALLY, DOES suck.

lol. You quoted the wrong person. And, I get the name "Trendkiller" from a certain Pantera album. You do the math.

Dr.Seussicide · 01-10-2010, 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N00bie
(spoke)
Oright look, I have a lot of ****ing **** on my chest;
a lot of ****ed up ****.
(/spoke)

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Robot Hunter

If i'm deciphering the "*****"'s correctly, then the first is fucking and the second is shit and if you combine these two words... this is what this rap is.

Fixed

t3hplatyz0rz · 01-19-2010, 11:33 AM

I think when reviewing this, you have to remember that most people who write aren't writing about themselves- they like to create characters. While songwriting is more often than not autobiographical, I highly doubt this is.
That said, I really dislike some of the language. Just not my style. It also seems to not have very much of a flow. But that's kinda hard to tell over the 'net.

Quote:

try using some soap, cuz compared to me your an isotope

>_> not a good line. Not at all.

I think that the last bit is the best, but still. You'd better have one nice beat to put this too, or else it's just not going to be very good.

BillyShears · 01-19-2010, 06:20 PM

I hope this is supposed to be rap. Because although we might not appreciate it, I know that rap fans would. Maybe you should split some stuff into different songs, just to shorten it up.

02-21-2009, 04:11 PM	#21 (permalink)
Rob-Boy Groupie Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Alberta, Canada Posts: 14	wow. why don't you call it "Rhyming couplets In Menopause"? It's overly emotional, and it's got no flow. __________________ Paper Ghost

02-21-2009, 07:25 PM	#22 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	I don't know who jamie is, but I think it's time to let go. It's probably mostly your fault anyway, and I didn't even read the whole song.

01-19-2010, 06:20 PM	#26 (permalink)
BillyShears Instrumental Octopus Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 65	I hope this is supposed to be rap. Because although we might not appreciate it, I know that rap fans would. Maybe you should split some stuff into different songs, just to shorten it up.