wow. why don't you call it "Rhyming couplets In Menopause"?

It's overly emotional, and it's got no flow.

I don't know who jamie is, but I think it's time to let go.
It's probably mostly your fault anyway, and I didn't even read the whole song.

lol. You quoted the wrong person. And, I get the name "Trendkiller" from a certain Pantera album. You do the math.

Fixed

I think when reviewing this, you have to remember that most people who write aren't writing about themselves- they like to create characters. While songwriting is more often than not autobiographical, I highly doubt this is.
That said, I really dislike some of the language. Just not my style. It also seems to not have very much of a flow. But that's kinda hard to tell over the 'net.
>_> not a good line. Not at all.

I think that the last bit is the best, but still. You'd better have one nice beat to put this too, or else it's just not going to be very good.

I hope this is supposed to be rap. Because although we might not appreciate it, I know that rap fans would. Maybe you should split some stuff into different songs, just to shorten it up.