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Old 01-24-2009, 09:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
"Hermione-Lite"
 
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Well written. I like it. But there was on part I didn't like:

Quote:
We are the children.
Led to a pedophile.
I don't know why, but I felt like the song was leading in the right direction and then you brought up pedophiles and I was thrown off.

It was well-written. Did you have a certain genre of music in mind for these lyrics?
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