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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Canada
Posts: 41
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![]() Silence Falls Upon Us As we walk to the rhythm of falling snow Our crimson lines shall not be traced Brought down and left behind Silence is all that falls upon us No one around for miles Cold, alone but pushing forward Impaled upon thorny crowns In search of deliverance Only to be denied of being whole There is no refuge here Nothing to fill the hollows that we bear Just to condemn the fallen Brought down and left behind Silence is all that falls upon us No one around for miles Cold, alone but pushing forward As we await our destilution (drawing near) Another falls defeated (down to the ground) Knowing we are not heading home I know the first verse is MUCH shorter than the second. But it was written to go with the guitar track I was given. I might make it longer later. I wrote this a while ago, and now I have trouble making sense of it. Or why I wrote of the lines the way I did. Maybe re-wording some of it might be a good idea...any suggestions? I don't swear in my songs, depsite some of the dark meanings. |
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