clockworkmice

If you hear a load of comments saying that your lyrics should be changed then usually following that advice is a good idea as opposed to jus listening to it and not taking any action. But it's your song I guess....

Wifey Boozer

I hate people.

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mr dave

gotta say i love the irony of seeing lyrics to a song that would have totally fit as some hippie love song in the 60s being slammed because it goes against some BS hippie ideal about integrity being directly proportionate to the individual's disdain for the established mainstream.

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Mike Smith

So are you on my side where this whole thing is concerned?

Cause i feel my song is very well written and could sell even today if it had a good enough beat to it.

mr dave

why does it matter?

all i was saying is that i found it funny that your song was getting slammed based on ideals established by people who would have written something similar back in their day. or at least it's the impression i get from the lyrics without knowing the music.

as for the samples on myspace my only comment is less words more breathing.

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Mike Smith

lol true it doesnt matter

i was pissed from the other comments when i wrote that

And it is funny i think, but whatever =]

And thanks for the advice

Im going to be re recording everything with professional quality mics, programs and studio type stuff in june or july, so ill post here more when i get new stuff up

yoboe

when i write a song that i think sucks i usually just forget about it, i dont even try to fix it.
but watever works for u is good. make a rough file and post it so we can listen