SGT .JAR

Hi! im brand spanking new to these parts, so ill just say what i have to. this thread shall be my area to share my writings and songs with those of you who care even alittle. hope you like them and as they come along and ill add more eventually, as the inspiration hits me like a 16-wheeler .
any comments or advice is welcomed.




i dont have a name for this one yet but i think its an allright song of mine.

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Head aching, its hard to breath,
blood churning, its hard to think,
vision's fading 'round the edges,
and still i'm moving around the ring.


This world, trying to take me down;
I will not go! Not here, not now!


This life, so cruel,
impossible to know what tomorrow brings,
to hope is to be a fool,
This fire in my eyes will not be winked!{/released/blinked (not sure yet)}


This world, trying to take me down;
I will not go! Not here, not now!


The drummer boy taps his last beat,
as thunder from cannons flow,
grown men from these sights flee,
as the bullet wound begins to grow.
the enemy thinks youll go quiet,
BUT YOUVE GOT NOTHING TO LIVE FOR!


This world, trying to take me down;
I will not go! Not here, not now! [x2]


I see the reaper's smile,
i can tell that ive been felled.
and suddenly im no longer of rank and file,
i smile.
One more reporting, ive served enough time in hell.


This world, trying to take us down;
DONT LET GO! NOT HERE, NOT NOW!