Killertu's Songwriting Journal (lyrics, member, title, quote, song)

Killertu · 01-05-2009, 07:23 AM

Well I'm a song writer and I just wrote this beautiful new love song but...here the thing.....I don't think people with less intelligent(no offense

)know what it mean,even i don't really get it the first time I wrote this but check it out if you knowwhat i'm saying.

You,the apple of my eye
You,the first love of my sight
You,the sould mate in my mind
Is only you
and only you

Who,the one by your side
who,will fight for your right
who,the love of my eye
is only you
and only you

Is you,to who I come true
Is you,that make me the who
Is you,and only you
To make me,someone for you

IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think???

PS:I just update a new part!,is till a draft BTW(I knwo I know...it chessy,the old part are color gray.)

01-05-2009, 07:23 AM	#9 (permalink)
Killertu Groupie Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: USA,MD Posts: 19	Does song needed to make sense??? Well I'm a song writer and I just wrote this beautiful new love song but...here the thing.....I don't think people with less intelligent(no offense)know what it mean,even i don't really get it the first time I wrote this but check it out if you knowwhat i'm saying. You,the apple of my eye You,the first love of my sight You,the sould mate in my mind Is only you and only you Who,the one by your side who,will fight for your right who,the love of my eye is only you and only you Is you,to who I come true Is you,that make me the who Is you,and only you To make me,someone for you IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think??? PS:I just update a new part!,is till a draft BTW(I knwo I know...it chessy,the old part are color gray.) __________________ "Parody is the love of music" Last edited by Killertu; 01-09-2009 at 07:22 AM. Reason: Up date part