Killertu's Songwriting Journal

Killertu · 01-05-2009, 02:12 PM

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Originally Posted by jackhammer

It's Intelligence-not Intelligent....

Well english have alot of different meaning

jackhammer · 01-05-2009, 02:22 PM

No I am pointing out that you used the wrong word which is quite ironic given the statement you wrote.

~~josh.averes~~ · 01-05-2009, 03:10 PM

the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.

Killertu · 01-05-2009, 05:15 PM

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Originally Posted by josh.averes

the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.

Urmm if u asking....I did say this is a PART ....not the whole song,all I needed is asking for this part to see if is good, if that what u saying up there about 17 second

~~josh.averes~~ · 01-05-2009, 05:33 PM

no it's not good. sorry. it is not correct

anticipation · 01-05-2009, 05:46 PM

does title?

**Janszoon** · 01-05-2009, 05:50 PM

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Originally Posted by anticipation

does title?

~~josh.averes~~ · 01-05-2009, 07:27 PM

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Originally Posted by anticipation

does title?

oops. pissed myself

FireInCairo · 01-05-2009, 07:30 PM

"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?

**Janszoon** · 01-05-2009, 07:32 PM

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Originally Posted by FireInCairo

"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?

Does joke needed to make sense?

01-05-2009, 02:22 PM	#12 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	No I am pointing out that you used the wrong word which is quite ironic given the statement you wrote. __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

01-05-2009, 07:30 PM	#19 (permalink)
FireInCairo Later on... Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Melbourne Posts: 1,235	"does song needed to make sense?" Is this a joke? __________________ O G MUDBONE: Only You can prevent forest fires.

01-05-2009, 03:10 PM	#13 (permalink)
~~josh.averes~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: New Zeeeealand Posts: 11	the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense. sorry. Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song. Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now. Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks. It's good though.

01-05-2009, 05:33 PM	#15 (permalink)
~~josh.averes~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: New Zeeeealand Posts: 11	no it's not good. sorry. it is not correct

01-05-2009, 05:46 PM	#16 (permalink)
anticipation Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,565	does title?