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11-26-2008, 02:21 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2008
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spend all night with me
Spend All Night With Me written by Anthony ???????
do you remember the day we first met i told you baby told you not to fret i told ya i gotta hold ya told ya im a soldier i can take a hit Im ready for rejection i swear i dont need perfection run away run away run away with me come on baby come on baby come on you'll see how you can spend all night spend all night with me i feel so alive ifeel so good i wanna hold you baby i know that i should don't want you to go o please stay with me i wanna hold you baby i will beg on my knees do you remenber that night i hate it when we fight i told you i was sorry i asked you not to leave o Why'd you say no o baby please dont go i really really need ya i know i gotta see ya run away run away run away with me come on baby come on baby come on you'll see how you can spend all night spend all night with me i feel so alive ifeel so good i wanna hold you baby i know that i should don't want you to go o please stay with me i wanna hold you baby i will beg on my knees run away run away run away with me come on baby come on baby come on you'll see how you can spend all night spend all night with me i feel so alive ifeel so good i wanna hold you baby i know that i should don't want you to go o please stay with me i wanna hold you baby i will beg on my knees o baby spend all night with if you like the lyrics email me at abragano123@yahoo.com |
11-26-2008, 02:26 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Proud Donnaholic
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Oregon
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Not too shabby, but I'm gonna be a grammar Nazi here and tell you that I would probably find it better if you spelled "o" as "Oh" and if you didn't capitalize "Why" in the middle of a line.
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11-26-2008, 05:56 PM | #3 (permalink) | |
we are stardust
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Australia
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11-28-2008, 01:24 PM | #5 (permalink) | |
Meanie McFeany
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY
Posts: 455
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e.e. cummings was a cunt. Or should I say... *776^&%5 *&^%^&% ~~~~~~~~ ^%Rrrr^&*&%$^% ~~~ ! |
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