Let's write a song together

guitargirl_93 · 11-26-2008, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Double X

Is it first person perspective or third person?

Haha, exactly what I was asking. It's kinda hard to write when you don't know these things!

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 11-26-2008, 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sonace

Perspective= The Turtles half penguin lover.

guitargirl_93 · 11-26-2008, 05:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sonace

I thought we were writing about a tortoise that raced a hare but the hair didn't take breaks, so he won, but then got drunk and passed out at an after-party and the tortoise suffocated him with a pillow.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 11-27-2008, 12:56 AM

Actually I think it's the turtle who wins..

FaSho · 11-27-2008, 08:57 AM

Not in this version.

~~josh.averes~~ · 01-04-2009, 07:18 PM

first post BTW love the site, will be coming back,

As Usain lined up Hawking for a hundred meter dash,
The turtle was already eying up the winners sash
The turtle dreamed the prize was his, his eyes transfixed on gold
Jamaicas heart was racing, the race already his.

He presumed

stevesonthebay · 01-12-2009, 07:43 AM

ok i get it. i got the opening line.
i met a turtle in a bar one fiday night.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 01-14-2009, 12:45 AM

Don't know his name. Got No reply.

(Okay so Sylable format is 12 then 8 for verses)

01-04-2009, 07:18 PM	#36 (permalink)
~~josh.averes~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: New Zeeeealand Posts: 11	first post BTW love the site, will be coming back, As Usain lined up Hawking for a hundred meter dash, The turtle was already eying up the winners sash The turtle dreamed the prize was his, his eyes transfixed on gold Jamaicas heart was racing, the race already his. He presumed Last edited by josh.averes; 01-04-2009 at 07:32 PM.

01-12-2009, 07:43 AM	#37 (permalink)
stevesonthebay Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 66	ok i get it. i got the opening line. i met a turtle in a bar one fiday night. __________________ Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us.

11-27-2008, 12:56 AM	#34 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	Actually I think it's the turtle who wins..

01-14-2009, 12:45 AM	#38 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	Don't know his name. Got No reply. (Okay so Sylable format is 12 then 8 for verses)