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11-24-2008, 01:14 AM | #33 (permalink) |
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It's so blunt.
I’m not sure What year it is now Please tell me, I don’t see why not Be still and stretch your legs It will help Ease your pain Never leave me Because I don’t think I could be. On Thursday night, I was squeamish At the thought of another stretch In the morgue It’s such a chore I’m bleeding And I want to turn this around, A scalpel drops crashing sound. The smell Of the ointment Rises into atmosphere You know its really all about Atmosphere In the evening You’ll never know what you want Its so, its so blunt. You say you love this stuff And You can never get enough I know you’re a liar
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11-24-2008, 02:26 PM | #34 (permalink) |
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Good job mate, your style's not really my thing, but I certainly like the lyrics. In fact I took the 'I Adore You' lyrics before hearing your version and came up with a verse and chorus on acoustic in seconds.
Very different to yours mind; verse is finger picked then into a slowish strum of A and C with the chorus sung slowly over the top. I've tuned down a whole step/tone on all strings too to get a more bassy sound. |
12-10-2008, 05:46 PM | #36 (permalink) |
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This is a little piano ballad I just wrote because I feel freakin' awful due to conjunctivitis and the flu. I could barely sing and I sound really weird on the recording.
I'm not well, Ripped, Bloodied eye. I'm not well, I beg you, please try. I'm getting better I'm beginning to feel alright I'm getting better May we never Fall apart Sickness, looming bitter My body fails again Sickness, looming bitter I hope I am on the mend.
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01-05-2009, 06:13 AM | #37 (permalink) |
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This was partly inspired by my girlfriend gushing about how sexy the guy from the teenagers is and me being an obsessive jealous-type. Oh, and he has no talent and a stupid mustache.
She's enamored with a rotten teenager uh woah He's got a leather jacket and hates her uh woah She wants to go She wants to go Gotta let her know Gotta make it show x2 She's excited by a cheap pretender uh woah He's all smiles, could never contend her uh woah She wants a ****ing old waster uh woah I wish I was a, I wish was a uh woah
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