Marooned (rock, favorite bands, album, Kiss, members)

Christian · 11-10-2008, 04:25 PM

This song's cheesy as hell, wrote this one after the demise of my first love.

my lady i miss you
i long for your soft hair
i know where you've been
i never knew how much i care
you wrote me a letter
it said write back soon
i'm not sure i will
cause i'm feeling marooned

do i want you back again
or just to be your friend
couldn't be a tougher choice
when you can't see the end
and i swear that i loved you
but i wont love you soon
cause the thought of hurting again
has left me marooned

for every rhyme there is a reason
for every dark there is a light
o'er every life looms a death
for every kiss another fight
and i do believe in miracles
but i cant see one soon
for what was once within us
has left us both marooned

i'm willing to move on
i just need some time
and to remember what
was yours and what was mine
to sort this whole thing over
and the hour will be soon
when we will forget
that we were ever marooned

thomasbreaker · 11-15-2008, 10:20 AM

Notice how most songs dwell on the topic of either on unfound love or lost love? Strange isn't it? But sure is good to express. Rock on.

Jim Colyer · 11-15-2008, 07:48 PM

New songwriters will always write about losing girlfriends or boyfriends. It is a natural thing.

FaSho · 11-15-2008, 09:33 PM

*cough*Brand New*cough*

aveneficus · 11-16-2008, 05:36 PM

wow, i actually like that a lot.
not as cheesy as i expected from your introduction.

love is the motivation for most poets..
and brand new is amazing

FaSho · 11-16-2008, 05:46 PM

Brand New are one of my favorite bands, and their kill your girlfriend album,Your Favorite Weapon, was my favorite one. (You should read my review of it

)

Christian · 11-16-2008, 07:53 PM

Yeah i wrote this when I was 13, so naturally it's pretty predictable/boring.

aveneficus · 11-16-2008, 08:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FaSho

Brand New are one of my favorite bands, and their kill your girlfriend album,Your Favorite Weapon, was my favorite one. (You should read my review of it

)

Yeah, Brand New is my favorite band and that album is amazing.
Link the review if you would, I'd enjoy it.

FaSho · 11-18-2008, 01:50 PM

http://www.musicbanter.com/members-j...ey-me-too.html

It's not very good, I'm still working on my reviewing skills.

BTW Christian, I hope you don't think i'm taking advanage of your thread.

11-10-2008, 04:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
Christian Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 15	Marooned This song's cheesy as hell, wrote this one after the demise of my first love. my lady i miss you i long for your soft hair i know where you've been i never knew how much i care you wrote me a letter it said write back soon i'm not sure i will cause i'm feeling marooned do i want you back again or just to be your friend couldn't be a tougher choice when you can't see the end and i swear that i loved you but i wont love you soon cause the thought of hurting again has left me marooned for every rhyme there is a reason for every dark there is a light o'er every life looms a death for every kiss another fight and i do believe in miracles but i cant see one soon for what was once within us has left us both marooned i'm willing to move on i just need some time and to remember what was yours and what was mine to sort this whole thing over and the hour will be soon when we will forget that we were ever marooned __________________ I'm beginning to hear voices....and there's no one around

11-15-2008, 10:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
thomasbreaker Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Travelling Posts: 26	Notice how most songs dwell on the topic of either on unfound love or lost love? Strange isn't it? But sure is good to express. Rock on. __________________ Make NOISE! Musikko <-- Filipino Bands and Music Artists

11-16-2008, 07:53 PM	#7 (permalink)
Christian Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 15	Yeah i wrote this when I was 13, so naturally it's pretty predictable/boring. __________________ I'm beginning to hear voices....and there's no one around

11-15-2008, 07:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
Jim Colyer Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Nashville, Tennessee Posts: 40	New songwriters will always write about losing girlfriends or boyfriends. It is a natural thing.

11-16-2008, 05:36 PM	#5 (permalink)
aveneficus Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Cincinnati, OH Posts: 44	wow, i actually like that a lot. not as cheesy as i expected from your introduction. love is the motivation for most poets.. and brand new is amazing