We are One - YOU ARE IT (lyrics, indie, rock)

infinite tea · 10-30-2008, 10:40 AM

Hey YOU :-)
I write poems which would be nice to put to music - here's an example of something below. Dunno what you think could be done with it, any ideas would be welcome :-)

And when all is said and done,
When the games been played and no ones won,
You'll look into the "I" and see,
Everything's eternity,
Seperation's mere illusion,
Oneness melts away confusion,
You are ALL and always were,
Despite how it may seem.
In oneness clarity restores,
The dreamer IS the dream.

If "we" are One then YOU are IT,
Change beliefs to change the dream,
If you are it then you are free,
To be the change you want to see.
The ALL's shaped by YOUR energy.
You are the ALL it has to be :-)
Break through your fears,
Open your mind,
Open the third "I" - you will find,
That "reality" changes as conciousness shifts,
That karma fades as awareness lifts,
That power sits in your own choices,
That you give volume to the voices,
You believed to be seperate but that's not true,
You are the dreamer and the dream IS YOU.

ALL IS ONE,
YOU ARE IT,
REALITY IS A DREAM.
BE THE DREAM YOU WANT TO SEE :-)

WendyCal · 10-31-2008, 07:45 AM

EXCELLENT WORK!!! Wow!

My only suggestion, as far as type of music, would be something where the lyrics could be heard and understood ~ Indie Rock, Pop, like that ~ because they ARE beautiful!

Best of luck with this, Tea!!!

FaSho · 10-31-2008, 10:24 PM

Seems...Flyleaf-y. Like chickcore. If that's what you want then cool, because I thought it was great.

Astronomer · 11-03-2008, 04:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FaSho

Seems...Flyleaf-y. Like chickcore. If that's what you want then cool, because I thought it was great.

Agreed.

I like it though

infinite tea · 11-05-2008, 04:10 PM

Hey - why did wendy cal get banned? Thanks for the kind comments.

FireInCairo · 11-15-2008, 08:33 PM

cause wendy cal was waaay bitch

10-30-2008, 10:40 AM	#1 (permalink)
infinite tea Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 2	We are One - YOU ARE IT Hey YOU :-) I write poems which would be nice to put to music - here's an example of something below. Dunno what you think could be done with it, any ideas would be welcome :-) And when all is said and done, When the games been played and no ones won, You'll look into the "I" and see, Everything's eternity, Seperation's mere illusion, Oneness melts away confusion, You are ALL and always were, Despite how it may seem. In oneness clarity restores, The dreamer IS the dream. If "we" are One then YOU are IT, Change beliefs to change the dream, If you are it then you are free, To be the change you want to see. The ALL's shaped by YOUR energy. You are the ALL it has to be :-) Break through your fears, Open your mind, Open the third "I" - you will find, That "reality" changes as conciousness shifts, That karma fades as awareness lifts, That power sits in your own choices, That you give volume to the voices, You believed to be seperate but that's not true, You are the dreamer and the dream IS YOU. ALL IS ONE, YOU ARE IT, REALITY IS A DREAM. BE THE DREAM YOU WANT TO SEE :-)

11-15-2008, 08:33 PM	#6 (permalink)
FireInCairo Later on... Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Melbourne Posts: 1,235	cause wendy cal was waaay bitch __________________ O G MUDBONE: Only You can prevent forest fires.

10-31-2008, 07:45 AM	#2 (permalink)
WendyCal Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 271	EXCELLENT WORK!!! Wow! My only suggestion, as far as type of music, would be something where the lyrics could be heard and understood ~ Indie Rock, Pop, like that ~ because they ARE beautiful! Best of luck with this, Tea!!!

11-05-2008, 04:10 PM	#5 (permalink)
infinite tea Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 2	Hey - why did wendy cal get banned? Thanks for the kind comments.