Incompetence (working title) (lyrics, quote, band, song, Hang)

Eggman · 10-19-2008, 09:09 AM

So yeah.
I've written a few things, and I like a few of 'em.
Here's one of 'em. >.>

Strung out like heathens,
We are forced to flee,
To run from our realms of security.

Disturbed from our dreams,
Awakened from peace,
Into a world of chaos and fraying seams.

The tides of change,
Nothing's the same,
As if we were just animals to tame.

Whether it was willing,
Or if we were told,
We're unmercifully shoved into a bottomless hole.

Unaware of the odds,
Abandoned by hope,
We flounder for light at the peak of the slope.

With dirt in our eyes,
Arms open wide,
By the rules of experience we must abide.

Any criticism is welcome, whether it's good or bad.
Preferably constructive, but life isn't always forgiving. >.>

10-19-2008, 09:09 AM	#1 (permalink)
Eggman Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Fort Worth, Texas Posts: 44	Incompetence (working title) So yeah. I've written a few things, and I like a few of 'em. Here's one of 'em. >.> Strung out like heathens, We are forced to flee, To run from our realms of security. Disturbed from our dreams, Awakened from peace, Into a world of chaos and fraying seams. The tides of change, Nothing's the same, As if we were just animals to tame. Whether it was willing, Or if we were told, We're unmercifully shoved into a bottomless hole. Unaware of the odds, Abandoned by hope, We flounder for light at the peak of the slope. With dirt in our eyes, Arms open wide, By the rules of experience we must abide. Any criticism is welcome, whether it's good or bad. Preferably constructive, but life isn't always forgiving. >.> __________________ -- Marshall http://last.fm/user/mdeAnr