#5 (lyrics, punk, genre, Kiss, songs)

SkyLucy · 10-17-2008, 07:11 PM

Just need some opinions if you'd oblige...I've been listening to a lot of Yeah Yeah Yeahs lately... Karen O. is the my mad-muse/goddess

Oh feels so good,
what a wonderful feeling,
to hear that gunshot pop

come on honey,
it's just for laughs
watch suicide rates hop

I wish you could take
a trip in my mind
and use what you see
to explain this all back to me

Nobody cares
if you're scared
we just want blood
it's good t.v.

I keep my promises
I keep my promises
here is the cave, come crawl inside
here is the cave come crawl inside
you spelunk
I spelunk
all it is
is a nice hot.....

I thought of you last night
with my hands behind my head
I wondered where you were
as I twisted in my bed..

And now......my hands are dry

FaSho · 10-17-2008, 07:12 PM

"Nobody cares
if you're scared
we just want blood
it's good t.v."

love it.

SkyLucy · 10-17-2008, 07:13 PM

Thanks ^__^

SkyLucy · 10-17-2008, 07:23 PM

I guess I could be promoting myself, but I've got 6 or seven songs written, most with melodies except one or two. I just can't figure out instrumentation for the life of me -___-

SkyLucy · 10-17-2008, 09:59 PM

Well, I mightaswell post one other thing, see if anyone has any mind about that...better than making a million and one threads of my songs..

So there's an itching in my mind
I wish I had a knife
to stab out all the words
That take over my life

With the burning in my throat
And the pulsing of my veins
A scratching in my skin
My eyes are wrapped in chains

I'd give my taste for all the kisses
of lovers gone and past,
My smell for all the flowers, wilting
fated, never last
My hearing for all the songs
you never sang to me
My sight for all your lovers
I hope I'll never see

Give me the knife
Give me the pen
I'll scrawl all the things
bursting from my brain

The world is yours
Your life is yours
My world is yours
My life is mine

WendyCal · 10-18-2008, 01:22 AM

This is really good

but you knew that.

You say that you have melodies laid out? How does this song do a downward pointed triangle in your music?

Oh! And i suppose i should ask the genre ~ THAT would probably make a BIG diff!

SkyLucy · 10-18-2008, 02:39 PM

What do you mean 'downward pointed triangle'?

And the second song is one of the only two without melodies as yet...but it's like Imogen Heap's 'Speeding Cars' song...if that makes sense.

kaleidoscope.. · 11-20-2008, 08:19 PM

These are awesome songs...
I love it...

"Nobody cares
if you're scared
we just want blood
it's good t.v."

that really is cool...

I'm impressed with the way you told the story of it without using many words..
hard to do..

good job

SkyLucy · 11-26-2008, 04:47 PM

Ha, thanks :p I really appreciate the feedback

10-17-2008, 07:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	#5 Just need some opinions if you'd oblige...I've been listening to a lot of Yeah Yeah Yeahs lately... Karen O. is the my mad-muse/goddess Oh feels so good, what a wonderful feeling, to hear that gunshot pop come on honey, it's just for laughs watch suicide rates hop I wish you could take a trip in my mind and use what you see to explain this all back to me Nobody cares if you're scared we just want blood it's good t.v. I keep my promises I keep my promises here is the cave, come crawl inside here is the cave come crawl inside you spelunk I spelunk all it is is a nice hot..... I thought of you last night with my hands behind my head I wondered where you were as I twisted in my bed.. And now......my hands are dry

11-26-2008, 04:47 PM	#9 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	Ha, thanks :p I really appreciate the feedback __________________ Floating down, the sound resounds Around the icy waters underground.

10-17-2008, 07:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	Thanks ^__^

10-17-2008, 07:23 PM	#4 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	I guess I could be promoting myself, but I've got 6 or seven songs written, most with melodies except one or two. I just can't figure out instrumentation for the life of me -___-

10-17-2008, 09:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	Well, I mightaswell post one other thing, see if anyone has any mind about that...better than making a million and one threads of my songs.. So there's an itching in my mind I wish I had a knife to stab out all the words That take over my life With the burning in my throat And the pulsing of my veins A scratching in my skin My eyes are wrapped in chains I'd give my taste for all the kisses of lovers gone and past, My smell for all the flowers, wilting fated, never last My hearing for all the songs you never sang to me My sight for all your lovers I hope I'll never see Give me the knife Give me the pen I'll scrawl all the things bursting from my brain The world is yours Your life is yours My world is yours My life is mine

10-18-2008, 01:22 AM	#6 (permalink)
WendyCal Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 271	This is really good but you knew that. You say that you have melodies laid out? How does this song do a downward pointed triangle in your music? Oh! And i suppose i should ask the genre ~ THAT would probably make a BIG diff!

10-18-2008, 02:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
SkyLucy Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Electric-Blue Kool-Aid Way Posts: 17	What do you mean 'downward pointed triangle'? And the second song is one of the only two without melodies as yet...but it's like Imogen Heap's 'Speeding Cars' song...if that makes sense.

11-20-2008, 08:19 PM	#8 (permalink)
kaleidoscope.. Groupie Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: New Zealand Posts: 44	These are awesome songs... I love it... "Nobody cares if you're scared we just want blood it's good t.v." that really is cool... I'm impressed with the way you told the story of it without using many words.. hard to do.. good job