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10-15-2008, 10:21 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Toronto, ON
Posts: 287
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A Waking Dream
I wrote this really simple tune a while ago, and I'd love some thoughts on it if anyone is willing to share. As of now I keep the chorus instrumental, though I still may change that. Anyways...
When I wake up from this dream I'm in I'm gonna make up for all the times I've missed in I'm gonna live for the first time in my life and I'm going to give all I've got cause it's what's right (instrumental chorus) So now I'm falling through the clear blue sky and I'm trying to hold the time slipping by but I keep falling through my entire life and now I realize that dream was alright (instrumental chorus) I actually made up the second verse (and the title) on the spot, because, well, I didn't have one before. It could probably use a little work, but, I guess that's why I'm posting it here anyways. Thanks in advance for reading. |
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