Chard's Songwriting Journal (lyrics, rock, doors, tunes, myspace)

chard · 02-22-2009, 11:49 AM

it was either that or see me when i pass you in the hallway.

chard · 02-22-2009, 12:54 PM

on the brink of madness
seeping slowly through the corridors of my mind
the catastrophic avents that mar our land
creating a whole language out of death
inviting the unsuspecting traveller
into the dephs of its bowels
and ripping each poor soul to shreds
by allowing the demons of this place
to have authority over man and beast
the savage links to our past have never been buried
and are still the fore front of every politition and leader
that appears on our tv screens and print
blood on the road of time insense of rotting flesh
diabolical power hungry individuals who play god
and are praised by the masses as saints
deliverers that bring light into our own personal darkness
shine the light on me for i still dont see!
i look at them and i feel ashamed to live side by side
with believers of the devil incarnate himself
wow what a revelation plz plz plz get a life
stop thinking that any man will save you
because its just not that simple.a child sometimes
can see what an adult cant, through an uncorrupt mind.
listen and learn if your not too far up the devils ass.

chard · 02-22-2009, 02:28 PM

cant help but feel out of touch
even though im with you all so much
my feelings are so different from yours
how can i, even the score.
you cant comprehend how much im hurting so
i pretend not to mind when you mysteriously go
when you return, the passion in me for you burns.

And its not like you dont care
you live in a different world your way out there.
i have tried to confront you without much success
so im writing this down il read it to you with finess
im not one for poetry or ser-an-ad-ing
but when you feel my love it always makes you sing.

So on that note il leave you to reside
to get things in perspective before you take the guy
its all or nothing i dont give my heart away for free
be my wife lets share our destiny.

darkcornerinthecloset · 02-22-2009, 03:29 PM

Its nice, but i notice that your stanzas in all your poems are very long and wordy. i suppose thats your way of writing, but i think it would look nicer to the reader if you shortened them more

chard · 02-22-2009, 03:42 PM

ok point taken wel see

chard · 02-23-2009, 07:48 AM

wave me goodbye
for im going away
do-nt you cry
your see me again one day
but for now il leave this with you
a little token that will comfort you
my gold chain
with a description on,
it means a lot to me
hope it helps you carry on.

when you leave
someone dear to your heart,
it causes real pain
when your apart,
i have to leave now
you new right from the start.

im all choked up
cant hide nothing from you
got to do a prison term
for a year or two
when ive done it
il be straight back to you.

if i had met you before
i wouldnt have done it at all
how i got caught it was comical
obviously im not laughing now

please dont visit
cant deal withit
but il write to you without fail
your the best thing thats ever happened to me
your love isnt for sale.

chard · 02-23-2009, 12:59 PM

routes ive taken yet have never spoken
the tales i could tell if promises are broken
hand shakes and deals that have made me a profit
in and out fast unlike those who copit

age comes wisdom well thats what they say
age is a constant reminder of who you are today
time has no consideration it has no predgedice
you can use and abuse but never escape it.

walk the path you have chosen
keep your head held high
dont get stamped on like an unwanted rodent
dont ever say die

keep what you got, keep a close eye on what you have not
stay ahead risky! be an achiever
theirs no need for greed, just sow them seeds
if you want whats mine gotta be a believer.

sitting on my beach with a pack of lager
the light of the moon streaming across the water
with my yaght anchored in the harbour
and a paid whore right beside yu

everyday is like a win at the races
what could be more enjoyable than that
yeh one day soon il be pushing up the daisys
heart attack cus im fat.

chard · 02-23-2009, 04:56 PM

going to town take in some sounds
take in some sights
see the big bright lights
everythings alright

going into town
goin to be around
take in a show
with a few friends you know

up goes the cheers
after a few beers
then down to the bar
pull out your marlin guitar
and stroke it with finess
put a stop sign on stress
gather round and be blessed
with jazz the very best.

crash_override · 02-23-2009, 08:06 PM

song or poem?

i dig it.

chard · 02-24-2009, 05:05 AM

both whet ever makes you happy.

02-22-2009, 12:54 PM	#22 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	licking dirt from the devils kettle on the brink of madness seeping slowly through the corridors of my mind the catastrophic avents that mar our land creating a whole language out of death inviting the unsuspecting traveller into the dephs of its bowels and ripping each poor soul to shreds by allowing the demons of this place to have authority over man and beast the savage links to our past have never been buried and are still the fore front of every politition and leader that appears on our tv screens and print blood on the road of time insense of rotting flesh diabolical power hungry individuals who play god and are praised by the masses as saints deliverers that bring light into our own personal darkness shine the light on me for i still dont see! i look at them and i feel ashamed to live side by side with believers of the devil incarnate himself wow what a revelation plz plz plz get a life stop thinking that any man will save you because its just not that simple.a child sometimes can see what an adult cant, through an uncorrupt mind. listen and learn if your not too far up the devils ass.

02-22-2009, 02:28 PM	#23 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	permanent ending cant help but feel out of touch even though im with you all so much my feelings are so different from yours how can i, even the score. you cant comprehend how much im hurting so i pretend not to mind when you mysteriously go when you return, the passion in me for you burns. And its not like you dont care you live in a different world your way out there. i have tried to confront you without much success so im writing this down il read it to you with finess im not one for poetry or ser-an-ad-ing but when you feel my love it always makes you sing. So on that note il leave you to reside to get things in perspective before you take the guy its all or nothing i dont give my heart away for free be my wife lets share our destiny.

02-23-2009, 07:48 AM	#26 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	terms and conditions wave me goodbye for im going away do-nt you cry your see me again one day but for now il leave this with you a little token that will comfort you my gold chain with a description on, it means a lot to me hope it helps you carry on. when you leave someone dear to your heart, it causes real pain when your apart, i have to leave now you new right from the start. im all choked up cant hide nothing from you got to do a prison term for a year or two when ive done it il be straight back to you. if i had met you before i wouldnt have done it at all how i got caught it was comical obviously im not laughing now please dont visit cant deal withit but il write to you without fail your the best thing thats ever happened to me your love isnt for sale.

02-23-2009, 12:59 PM	#27 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	just a reminder routes ive taken yet have never spoken the tales i could tell if promises are broken hand shakes and deals that have made me a profit in and out fast unlike those who copit age comes wisdom well thats what they say age is a constant reminder of who you are today time has no consideration it has no predgedice you can use and abuse but never escape it. walk the path you have chosen keep your head held high dont get stamped on like an unwanted rodent dont ever say die keep what you got, keep a close eye on what you have not stay ahead risky! be an achiever theirs no need for greed, just sow them seeds if you want whats mine gotta be a believer. sitting on my beach with a pack of lager the light of the moon streaming across the water with my yaght anchored in the harbour and a paid whore right beside yu everyday is like a win at the races what could be more enjoyable than that yeh one day soon il be pushing up the daisys heart attack cus im fat.

02-23-2009, 04:56 PM	#28 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	jazz zzaj going to town take in some sounds take in some sights see the big bright lights everythings alright going into town goin to be around take in a show with a few friends you know up goes the cheers after a few beers then down to the bar pull out your marlin guitar and stroke it with finess put a stop sign on stress gather round and be blessed with jazz the very best.

02-22-2009, 11:49 AM	#21 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	it was either that or see me when i pass you in the hallway.

02-22-2009, 03:29 PM	#24 (permalink)
darkcornerinthecloset Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 160	Its nice, but i notice that your stanzas in all your poems are very long and wordy. i suppose thats your way of writing, but i think it would look nicer to the reader if you shortened them more

02-22-2009, 03:42 PM	#25 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	ok point taken wel see

02-23-2009, 08:06 PM	#29 (permalink)
crash_override Seemingly Silenced Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Everett, WA Posts: 2,312	song or poem? i dig it.

02-24-2009, 05:05 AM	#30 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	both whet ever makes you happy.