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03-21-2009, 04:52 PM | #91 (permalink) |
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shreds its skin
A world of awesome wonder,
world of life and thunder. Deafness has an institute, i beg you dont follow suit. downward spiral plunging fast, no such person an outcast. walking a well trodden path, knowing you wont be first or last. You have a brain think again, use it or lose it, at your own peril. Be confident be equal dont be fooled in not trying, fools out, no sense in dying. Yes its tough at the top its easier just to drop stand dont fade away. Ambitions to great to achieve, thats what negativity will have you believe. A trail of loss and hurt, disolusionment face in the dirt. Stride aim high, dont let oppurtunities pass you by. If you just let it,you wont regret it. For life is, and will always be sweet faith kills the heat, and gives you back your heart beat. Death by paranoia all tied up and gagged, face it eccept it your shagged. Positivity keep it in mind, or be forever closed to oppurtunity walking blind, miss all them life changing signs. keep singing those uplifting songs, dipose of your old self and your do no wrong. Dont eccept whats on your plate stretch out reach higher, dont be a wingless chicken!! be a flyer. |
03-22-2009, 06:33 PM | #92 (permalink) |
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Routes!!!!!!!!!!!
Roots
how solid is the ground you walk on roots Do you have a strong link to your past roots A place so close to your heart roots Knowing where you belong roots or is it the place you run from. I was brought up there, but i dont want to die there. my brother and sister have moved away to the otherside of the planet, They have planted new roots. Trying to forget where they come from, never to return home. They have found where they belong. Roots alive and well my feet firmly on the ground this place close to hell on the edge of town its where i was born well half a mile away its where my kids go to school each and every day. Roots so close, to hard to break free seems like an eternity. Mind, body and soul tired of this dirty rotten hole The whole of planet earth should be my home, but most places you dont dare roam. Roots Stay and be glad your british through and through my roots are here, an ocean of history. roots, the undenyable truth. |
03-23-2009, 10:20 AM | #93 (permalink) |
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What face are you?
EVERYONE IS MORE FRIENDLIER AT CHRISTMAS
EVERYONE IS UNITED IN CHEER NO,ONE IS PARTICUALARY DOUBTFULL ,THIS TIME OF YEAR CHRISTMAS, IS FIN ALLY HERE. everyone going out of their way giving a helping hand thoughtful and helpful isnt christmas grand families united through the festivities forgetting of the year thats past,and all the injustice. Two weeks of laughter filling your bellys full not a harsh word said about anyone its a wonderful time of the year when the new year begins everyone goes into hiding see them a few days later, there as friendly as an allegater. two-faced me thinks,was xmas really that bad, the pressure of having time off away from work colleagues and staff. Back to grinding teeth,and chewing nails, bills more bills when recieving mail. Life to me is one big celebration christmas everyday, food n drink n festivities its our right to live its the only way. Try to be more ocean minded with the little you have got true happiness isnt found when trying to ecumilate alot Try to stretch your humanity throughout the whole year THEN WE MIGHT LEARN TO LOVE ONE ANOTHER AND NOT LIVE IN FEAR GET INTO THE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT FOREVER DRINKING BEER. |
04-05-2009, 04:07 PM | #95 (permalink) |
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a friend in deed
Tresspass into my yard
read my name its chard its not a great deal to ask, its not that hard,to swig from a flask. decieving the reader its a game of chance open wide its time to feed her, its clear at a glance. Open questions make it for me the answers are endless, no fatalities clear as day, as sweet as candy nothing to pay thats always handy. Give me an answer that i havent heard from the heart, nothing to obsurd friendly fire are we thinking the same, theres only you n me here, no others can be blamed. Dreams are for losers, a path of despair get your head out from beneath that rock and eccept life isnt fair dont condemn yourself or cry out for pity your crys fall silent in the inner cities everyone and no one its all the same here from the top to the bottom boundries arent clear its not wrong to dream but let it not take over it seems to me its causing you some bother this is just a suggestion read the holy bible clear answers to your questions basic instinct, survival. every religion give it a read how fruitfull are your seeds i am just a friend in need. |
04-07-2009, 02:42 PM | #96 (permalink) |
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two in one
Pushed to succeed
at every given turn stand your ground eccept whats coming good or bad no point running. Drummed into me im the best their is your a fighter and a winner the best in the biz. There be times when youll be confronted by oponents better than you but inside the ring you do what you have to. Do you want to be nobody for the rest of your life its your chance to be somebody now feel my might. I feel like a champion through and through the world is mine and one day soon youll believe it to. Was it wrong of my dad changing my view of life giving me boxing gloves and breaking my nose more than twice no excuse, just a fact of life. Only the strong stand the weak will fall what are you my son? im a monster. |
04-08-2009, 11:17 AM | #97 (permalink) |
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hand in hand
Finance your living, set your pace
the earth is your oyster,get intimate face to face. Dont slog it out dont live to your means travel the road, thats lined in gold. As i was walking i saw a vision it was calling me like a whisper on the wind for the colour scapes that shrouded the land was creating a narrow path pushing me forward entering its domain couldnt see the way i came. Its a dream, everything is different here some how though peaceful and beautiful untouched by man. It costs nothing to be beautiful love our creators creation stop and think you know whats sinful dont live beyond your station. If you love your brothers and your sisters to then you wont decieve them and do what sinners do you wont be bothered what your friends are doing stop right there forget about what their persuing. head out into the world with a rucksack on your back a bible in your hand to preach to the peoples of this land how to be wealthy respected and true forget all the learning that man has taught you. down through the ages you see a poor man with faith you think thats you when you sign up its a lie you know thats not the truth its your love of money read the book of ruth. dont become to friendly, with the enemy for they will rob you blind without faith, youll have nothing left on your plate. with faith you have no enemys you may share and open your home may the love of god touch them freely where they roam to live in denial fear grips your mind to prevent you from seeing maybe your safe but your blind never realising your potential then running out of time. love thy stranger wether thief, murderer or other for here stands a potential brother. |
04-09-2009, 04:17 PM | #99 (permalink) |
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I've got a couple beefs with this poem/thing.
The first is that almost the whole way through it doesn't really have a pattern. The second is that the last line kind of comes out of no where. I did get the point of the poem though, so kudos. Maybe a little more structure would serve you well? It was nice though. |
04-18-2009, 05:41 AM | #100 (permalink) |
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sad britain
In the midst of day living with time being consumed
im off on a plane destination dark side of the moon maybe there il get some peace n quiet,scream free diet no problems arising where moneys not to tight. everyone around me is bringing me down living isnt easy on the depressing side of town they just dont stop their complaining they do nothing about it its to straining. A big headache thats lingering a whole nation blues singing its enough to drive you to suicide to relieve the suffering inside. Now im not even being spoken to ive upset them all with my point of view its ok for me for im still employed they just dont get it im annoyed stop your whinging its spreading all over like a disease its swallowing whole its causing me real bother your not have me follow you down the hole. its not the end of the world though some think it ive got cotton wool for my ears now you can all stick it. time for me to make an exit to late to fix it. |
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