Chard's Songwriting Journal

chard · 09-24-2008, 05:24 AM

i see you searching high and low
youve got 2 speed up lifes 2 slow
be ocean minded lift your spirit high
go out enjoy life never say die

get your body into a rythum
only you know what you can achieve
im busy strummin-set your mind at ease
look at your life as though it was a dance
now get out onto the dance floor take a chance

dont be alarmed its not an illusion
step out of this world of confusion
hardluck people everywhere
living their lives in silent despair

for 2mor is a new day
it hasnt been written yet
go out with a smile
what ever you need im sure your get...chorus

be ocean minded lift your spirit high
go out enjoy life never say die.

chard · 09-24-2008, 06:00 AM

red is the colour of passion
and passion ive got for you
a heart made of roses
wrapped in a ribbon or 2
the colour of the roses are yellow and white
representing love all 4 you my beautiful wife.

when i awake in the morning and your lying next 2 me
heaven is a place on earth you help me see
never thought id feel like this
i do every time we hug and kiss

2gether 4everno matter where we are
2gether 4ever your my bright shining star,,,,,,

your smile so warm
your heart so kind
i come in from a storm
when im out of my mind
you bless me with peace and fulfilling love
the power in you surley from the heavens above

2gether 4ever death do us part
2gether 4ever youl always have my heart

holding your hand in mine
the sun always seems to shine
staring into your eyes
couldnt ever say goodbye
you are like nothing ive ever known
now ive met you il never be alone
you could brighten up the darkest day
wouldnt matter what ud do or say

2gether 4ever no matter where you are
2gether 4ever your my bright shining star.

paradoxy · 03-18-2009, 11:10 AM

i just love the sentiment expressed in this song...it is so nice to hear someone writing a love song to their wife for a change,,,beautiful...brightened up my morning.

chard · 02-13-2009, 11:02 AM

in my mind im drowning
though im on solid ground
my heart is pounding
as i fall further down

trying to make sense of it all
still, not getting very far
wheres my optimism gone
wheres my bright shining star

im in a dark dark place
my world is closing in on me
is this my fate
is this my destiny

Pornographie Nouveau · 02-13-2009, 11:07 AM

Very generic. Sorry bro.

lucifer_sam · 02-13-2009, 10:10 PM

Cheesy generic nu-metal shite lyrics. This theme's been done before.

Shoe · 02-13-2009, 10:31 PM

Did you take this off of a [insert nu-metal band here] track? Cuz it sounds really familiar...

chard · 02-17-2009, 01:54 AM

its an original but thankyou means im getting there cheers.

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Originally Posted by Pornographie Nouveau

Very generic. Sorry bro.

thankyou its so hard these days to meet a fellow professional like myself lol.

Schizotypic · 02-25-2009, 07:52 PM

I thought it was good, but apparently it's very generic.

GuitarBizarre · 02-25-2009, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by likuidcoka

you need to smoke some weed and then write

Because of course, THAT hasn't ever been done before.

I propose a better tactic. Instead of following the weed writing trend, eat a baby THEN write on the back of its recently flayed skin.

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09-24-2008, 05:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	Chard's Songwriting Journal i see you searching high and low youve got 2 speed up lifes 2 slow be ocean minded lift your spirit high go out enjoy life never say die get your body into a rythum only you know what you can achieve im busy strummin-set your mind at ease look at your life as though it was a dance now get out onto the dance floor take a chance dont be alarmed its not an illusion step out of this world of confusion hardluck people everywhere living their lives in silent despair for 2mor is a new day it hasnt been written yet go out with a smile what ever you need im sure your get...chorus be ocean minded lift your spirit high go out enjoy life never say die. Last edited by chard; 02-12-2009 at 08:49 AM.

09-24-2008, 06:00 AM	#2 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	4ever yours red is the colour of passion and passion ive got for you a heart made of roses wrapped in a ribbon or 2 the colour of the roses are yellow and white representing love all 4 you my beautiful wife. when i awake in the morning and your lying next 2 me heaven is a place on earth you help me see never thought id feel like this i do every time we hug and kiss 2gether 4everno matter where we are 2gether 4ever your my bright shining star,,,,,, your smile so warm your heart so kind i come in from a storm when im out of my mind you bless me with peace and fulfilling love the power in you surley from the heavens above 2gether 4ever death do us part 2gether 4ever youl always have my heart holding your hand in mine the sun always seems to shine staring into your eyes couldnt ever say goodbye you are like nothing ive ever known now ive met you il never be alone you could brighten up the darkest day wouldnt matter what ud do or say 2gether 4ever no matter where you are 2gether 4ever your my bright shining star. Last edited by chard; 02-09-2009 at 05:44 AM. Reason: love

02-13-2009, 11:02 AM	#4 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	Catchy ay? in my mind im drowning though im on solid ground my heart is pounding as i fall further down trying to make sense of it all still, not getting very far wheres my optimism gone wheres my bright shining star im in a dark dark place my world is closing in on me is this my fate is this my destiny

02-13-2009, 10:10 PM	#6 (permalink)
lucifer_sam Unrepentant Ass-Mod Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 3,921	Cheesy generic nu-metal shite lyrics. This theme's been done before. __________________ first.am

03-18-2009, 11:10 AM	#3 (permalink)
paradoxy Groupie Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Slocan, B.C., Canada Posts: 14	i just love the sentiment expressed in this song...it is so nice to hear someone writing a love song to their wife for a change,,,beautiful...brightened up my morning.

02-13-2009, 11:07 AM	#5 (permalink)
Pornographie Nouveau Hip Priest Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: UK Posts: 302	Very generic. Sorry bro.

02-25-2009, 07:52 PM	#9 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	I thought it was good, but apparently it's very generic.