ADELE's Songwriting Journal

~~ADELE~~ · 09-11-2008, 04:11 PM

is it because ise black!]

right-track · 09-11-2008, 04:12 PM

I can give you my opinion if you want?

jackhammer · 09-11-2008, 04:18 PM

I can give you an opinion too. I don't mind..honestly.

~~ADELE~~ · 09-11-2008, 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track

Maybe he just doesn't like you.

shall I slam dunk him?
go on then.
But critique my serious songs.

See oojay calls me an ass and writes "****ty lyrics?"
He doesn't have much wit in the way he critiques my words does he?
Then you look at his views in slavery section and you get the idea he thinks he is a bit aggressive.

Wifey Boozer · 09-11-2008, 04:20 PM

Well you're cool... just asking, because it seems like, you post a lot in here, and to me, respectively, it just seems like all your stuff has respectable grounds, but lacks a story, or substance, if you will. Man, I love commas... anyhow. What I do is stay with one piece for a while and develop it.

Urban Hat€monger ? · 09-11-2008, 04:23 PM

I think it's wonderful

jackhammer · 09-11-2008, 04:23 PM

So this song is not serious then?

~~ADELE~~ · 09-11-2008, 04:35 PM

No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs?
I am assuming if you have any nouce you do.
But what people make of the same thing is their choice.
For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song.
You make of it what you will.

right-track · 09-11-2008, 04:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ADELE

No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs?
I am assuming if you have any nouce you do.
But what people make of the same thing is their choice.
For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song.
You make of it what you will.

Then you don't have a problem with oojay's appraisal then?

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 09-11-2008, 04:48 PM

This lacks pretty much everything positive.

09-11-2008, 04:18 PM	#33 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	I can give you an opinion too. I don't mind..honestly. __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

09-11-2008, 04:20 PM	#35 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	Well you're cool... just asking, because it seems like, you post a lot in here, and to me, respectively, it just seems like all your stuff has respectable grounds, but lacks a story, or substance, if you will. Man, I love commas... anyhow. What I do is stay with one piece for a while and develop it. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

09-11-2008, 04:23 PM	#36 (permalink)
Urban Hat€monger ? The Sexual Intellectual Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Somewhere cooler than you Posts: 18,605	I think it's wonderful __________________ Urb's RYM Stuff Most people sell their soul to the devil, but the devil sells his soul to Nick Cave.

09-11-2008, 04:23 PM	#37 (permalink)
jackhammer Ba and Be. Join Date: May 2007 Location: This Is England Posts: 17,331	So this song is not serious then? __________________ It be my music and film collection. “A cynic by experience, a romantic by inclination and now a hero by necessity.”

09-11-2008, 04:11 PM	#31 (permalink)
~~ADELE~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: London Posts: 466	is it because ise black!]

09-11-2008, 04:12 PM	#32 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	I can give you my opinion if you want?

09-11-2008, 04:35 PM	#38 (permalink)
~~ADELE~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: London Posts: 466	No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs? I am assuming if you have any nouce you do. But what people make of the same thing is their choice. For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song. You make of it what you will.