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you are freakin out, man
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: ajax, ontario
Posts: 129
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Wow, i haven't posted on here in a very long time. But I've still been writing and obviously you have too, so there's something of mine that I'd like your opinion on. Half the references that are important to me won't mean anything to you, but i guess that's alright.
--------------------------------------------------------- Forgetmenaut With my eyes full of frailty as with her reflection I look up with as much hope as I can afford It takes more than what’s in me to learn this last lesson And more courage than I’ve got to die by this sword That might be why this pen feels less mighty than ever, Why I fear that blade more than all others have swung ’Cause I haven’t shone this bright in what seems like forever, Since the days we were foolish and smiling and young But now I’ve started thinking ‘bout how sometimes fate just can’t be fought. So we’ll dry our eyes and wave goodbye, and I’ll miss my Forgetmenaut. But why try to clutch at closure with our hands and tongues so tightly tied, and all because I thought that we had already watched enough things die? And so we’ll mourn, yes, just the two of us, whatever tragedy it was it made her into something beautiful. We fell from grace and fell from touch, who thought that we’d become this much? We’ll never need another miracle. How many years has it been since the colour left my eyes? How long was it she watched only to see what lay in waiting? Why wasn’t I surprised to awake with her in the sky and how come the clouds only open when I feel my faith is fading? I laughed as they built up their walls and claimed what we now know was ours, but lamented myself away once their crossed hearts uncrossed our stars. And even though we’ll never show how much of our hope had survived, at least we can forever know no one ever felt so alive. -------------------------------------------------------------- crit for crit, you know the deal. Last edited by creepinson; 11-07-2015 at 05:36 PM. |
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