Thoughts welcome... (country, punk, member, memories, cheap)

Johnny Gasoline · 06-19-2008, 05:44 AM

Nothing more to say really, just interested in what anyone has to say.

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The Miracle Man

I come to you with open arms
Magic tricks and lucky charms
I know we’re gonna get along
I don’t ask for much you’ll find
Just a moment of your time
And if you wanna quit that’s fine

I know secrets never told
Memories bought and sold
All that glitters may be gold
If you wanna talk it’s free
But listening well that don’t come cheap
Misery loves company

Take your time and think about it I sure do understand
And when you’re ready then you know where you can find me
Just ask for the miracle man

I don’t discriminate or soothe
I alienate and suffer fools
Got to be kind to be cruel
Now your time is at an end
Run along and tell your friends
I’ll be back around again

If you jump just be careful where you land
You won’t see me but I might be right behind you
That’s why I’m called the miracle man

Remember when we meet again I did not force your hand
What you ask for isn’t always what you wanted
And that is why they call me the mother****ing miracle man

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If you want to hear it in context you can click the signature link if that helps. Look forward to some response. Any response lol.

mellofello · 06-19-2008, 06:14 AM

I like this punk country sound, cool. suggestion would be a brief pause after along.... them semi scream "just fine !" brief pause after that's fine.. "with me !"

gold... "you see ?!"
company "with me !"

you could continue this theme. just an idea. peace.

Johnny Gasoline · 06-19-2008, 08:19 AM

Thanks, appreciate the poz feedback

06-19-2008, 05:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
Johnny Gasoline Groupie Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 2	Thoughts welcome... Nothing more to say really, just interested in what anyone has to say. --- The Miracle Man I come to you with open arms Magic tricks and lucky charms I know we’re gonna get along I don’t ask for much you’ll find Just a moment of your time And if you wanna quit that’s fine I know secrets never told Memories bought and sold All that glitters may be gold If you wanna talk it’s free But listening well that don’t come cheap Misery loves company Take your time and think about it I sure do understand And when you’re ready then you know where you can find me Just ask for the miracle man I don’t discriminate or soothe I alienate and suffer fools Got to be kind to be cruel Now your time is at an end Run along and tell your friends I’ll be back around again If you jump just be careful where you land You won’t see me but I might be right behind you That’s why I’m called the miracle man Remember when we meet again I did not force your hand What you ask for isn’t always what you wanted And that is why they call me the mother****ing miracle man --- If you want to hear it in context you can click the signature link if that helps. Look forward to some response. Any response lol. __________________ http://www.facebook.com/pages/Johnny...ne/17514346579

06-19-2008, 08:19 AM	#3 (permalink)
Johnny Gasoline Groupie Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 2	Thanks, appreciate the poz feedback __________________ http://www.facebook.com/pages/Johnny...ne/17514346579

06-19-2008, 06:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
mellofello Groupie Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 9	I like this punk country sound, cool. suggestion would be a brief pause after along.... them semi scream "just fine !" brief pause after that's fine.. "with me !" gold... "you see ?!" company "with me !" you could continue this theme. just an idea. peace.