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Old 12-07-2009, 07:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Nevermind. I won't make you go through the whole downloading process.

I loved the second part, much stronger lyrics while keeping the same kind of "whatever" sound to it.
Plus Lovely cough at the beginning, just what every song really needs.

However, why is your voice 100% panned to the Left?
My headphones were tickling me very badly lol !
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Old 12-07-2009, 08:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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However, why is your voice 100% panned to the Left?
My headphones were tickling me very badly lol !
Shit... because the program automatically pans everything to the left for some reason and I forgot to fix it. Gah. I think I'm going to redo the vocals AGAIN though, so rest assured that the very last final version of this song will create even headphone tickling.
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Old 12-16-2009, 02:47 AM   #3 (permalink)
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We smoked cigarettes down old dirt roads
Our feet in the freezing lake
Watching our lives on the water's reflection
Dancing with every ache.

We'd disappear for hours at a time
Just lying in a field
Nothing free from our curious minds
No wish stayed concealed.

Walking by the bridge we bitched about our fathers
Til we were out of breath
We planned our wedding days and danced down the sidewalk
Til no sun was left.

But you can't see just right with the moon in your eyes.

I would hide in bed wishing to be lovely
Soak my face with tears
But nothing could quite replace your ready shoulders
Nothing's changed throughout the years.

We laughed about that lonely highway
"Let's hitchhike out of here
With friends for family and no set direction
Let's just have someone else steer."

I'm sad for what is gone, I'm sad for what is there
When the night begins to fall
Courage is found on the desolate hillside
Or just past this wall.

But you can't see just right with the moon in your eyes.

That town is a drain; it'll suck you dry
If you don't get away
Yeah that town is a drain, even once you've gone
Your heart still remains.

Now all these sedatives are keeping me awake
And I can't breath for all this air
A pretty noose will strangle you with it's beauty
A predetermined snare.

Is it a guilty mind that's causing this sick stomache
Or just this empty bottle of booze?
I've been watching life on the surface of new waters
But all I see is you.

But you can't see just right with the moon in your eyes
Recorded this tonight, only a first draft so it's subject to change but feedback would be appreciated!

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