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This is a poem I recently wrote about an isanely realistic dream I had. Tell me what you think.
In my dream I am driving.
My tires grip onto winding roads embellished by the Dancing shadows of Sun shining through autumn leaves. Turn after turn I embrace the sun Warming my face, then disappearing behind a mountain Only to re-emerge moments later. In my dream I am troubled. I am happy with the wind blowing through the opened windows Carrying my hair in its delicate gusts But I am harried. Bothered by something, Unsettled by its creeping presence. I look over my shoulder to laughing passengers unknown By voice and indistinct face. In my dream I am weeping. Before I can realize I’ve slipped from the road I feel The burning of heavy tears staining my cheeks And filling wide, searching eyes. My friends are departed and a tight Knot of trepidation fixes itself in my stomach, Writhing, acidic, and intolerable. In my dream I am dying. A sudden realization takes over my being That this is the end of my short mediocre life, and Morbid as it is I am peaceful. I watch myself fly off the edge of the green, but rocky cliff And I am falling. Sailing on the same enjoyed wind in a Downward spiral to the bottom. |
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