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~~mjscarousal~~ · 12-24-2008, 10:41 PM

That was great. Very original.

Arya Stark · 12-25-2008, 08:23 AM

I'm so confused. I just wanted to know why they were making faces. >.<

It is a good poem, though.
Well done. >.>

MSPaintClock · 12-27-2008, 11:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

Shut the **** up.

Yo man you haven't seen the streets like I have.

V.v

Wifey Boozer · 12-29-2008, 05:17 PM

You talk like that out on "the streets" you'll get your ass knifed.

MSPaintClock · 12-29-2008, 10:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

You talk like that out on "the streets" you'll get your ass knifed.

Oh I'm sorry Bob Dylan, I'll watch out in those *** pride neighborhoods.

Also, Troy, New York - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

o.o;

Surell · 12-29-2008, 10:13 PM

MS, what are you helping right now?

Anyway, to prevent this from being a spam post, this is a good poem. The metaphor base of it is good, and the description is great too. Bueno.

Wifey Boozer · 12-30-2008, 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MSPaintClock

Oh I'm sorry Bob Dylan, I'll watch out in those *** pride neighborhoods.

Also, Troy, New York - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

o.o;

What's your point? Yes, I know I live in a ****hole. I like it, it's got soul.

MSPaintClock · 12-30-2008, 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

What's your point? Yes, I know I live in a ****hole. I like it, it's got soul.

A ****hole with an 80% white population with plenty of them middle class or up, sorry Bob Dylan I can't give you much street cred as you'd like.

x.x

Wifey Boozer · 12-30-2008, 11:42 AM

I never asked for street credit, ace.

Are you saying blacks are criminals, sir? Damn, that's racist!

By the way, wikipedia is a freewrite, anyone can submit anything. Sites like this: Troy New York Crime Reports, Crime News, and Crime Statistics , are not freewrites. Whities have guns and dicks too, mate.
Uncle Sam's Place - Troy, NY -- TUI - Gang-related activity in Troy's North Central Neighborhood

Explain to me why then, if I go to Troy High up here, instead of saying "One of the black kids..." The lingo seems to be, "one of the white kids...". In my Science class, I am the only white broad in there.

And why the **** do you keep calling my Bob Dylan? Yes, I like the man, I do, one of the most talented musicians to ever walk the earth. But Bob Dylan's closer to Billy the Kid than he is Johnny Truelove

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And that tall drink in the icon? That's Cate Blanchet.

x.x, motherfucker.

Arya Stark · 12-30-2008, 02:07 PM

GOOD POEM. I LIKE THE POEM.

I'm pretty sure the person didn't make this thread so that you two could argue.

12-29-2008, 05:17 PM	#54 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	You talk like that out on "the streets" you'll get your ass knifed. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

12-30-2008, 11:42 AM	#59 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	I never asked for street credit, ace. Are you saying blacks are criminals, sir? Damn, that's racist! By the way, wikipedia is a freewrite, anyone can submit anything. Sites like this: Troy New York Crime Reports, Crime News, and Crime Statistics , are not freewrites. Whities have guns and dicks too, mate. Uncle Sam's Place - Troy, NY -- TUI - Gang-related activity in Troy's North Central Neighborhood Explain to me why then, if I go to Troy High up here, instead of saying "One of the black kids..." The lingo seems to be, "one of the white kids...". In my Science class, I am the only white broad in there. And why the ** do you keep calling my Bob Dylan? Yes, I like the man, I do, one of the most talented musicians to ever walk the earth. But Bob Dylan's closer to Billy the Kid than he is Johnny Truelove . And that tall drink in the icon? That's Cate Blanchet. x.x, motherfucker. __________________ ... Stalin had a FANTASTIC** moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr] Last edited by Wifey Boozer; 12-30-2008 at 12:03 PM.

12-24-2008, 10:41 PM	#51 (permalink)
~~mjscarousal~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 106	That was great. Very original.

12-25-2008, 08:23 AM	#52 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I'm so confused. I just wanted to know why they were making faces. >.< It is a good poem, though. Well done. >.>

12-30-2008, 02:07 PM	#60 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	GOOD POEM. I LIKE THE POEM. I'm pretty sure the person didn't make this thread so that you two could argue.