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06-08-2008, 09:51 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 9
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Ashes In Disguise - feedback please !
One of my new songs. good feedback is always good, but constructive criticism is what really helps, thank you
youtube.com/watch?v=SxlbHnucVoI&fmt=18 (C)I'm from the (F)country (C)the end of the (F)line (C)trucks run right (F)through here like they're out of (G)time a thousand years later it ain't worth a dime we run through this world like we all want to die (C)bottles run (F)empty (C)tears all run (F)dry (C)cigarrettes are (F)ashes in (G)diguise (F)the last word is (G)always (C)goodbye I've got this one friend who lives in the park he's crazy as money he sleeps til it's dark he's got a bad habit of laughin and cryin' do you think his tears are worth less than mine ? bottles run empty tears all run dry cigarettes are ashes in diguise the last word is always goodbye what are we chasing what does it mean the worlds spinning faster than ever it seems I'm from the country the end of the line people drive through here like their out of time bottles run empty tears all run dry we're all just ashes in disguise the last word is always goodbye |
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