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Old 05-29-2008, 06:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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those are some tips i can use, thanks.
and i agree with you about the chorus part. by far the weakest part of the song and it more than anything needs adjusting.
once again, thanks alot

any other critiques would be appreciated
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