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04-09-2008, 01:48 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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"Cupid's Fall"
Some lyrics I wrote a few years ago, the subject being a young couple's divorce.
"Cupid's Fall" VERSE ONE: It's quiet on your side of the bed tonight As I search my mind for a reason why Why my heart is feeling so old Like the very man I was Has crumbled and turned into dust And your teardrops have made me into mud The mud that covered up our love CHORUS 1x: And with our vows returned Cupid's wings were burned And not a saving grace will catch him Catch him when he falls Demon with those angel wings Hatred does your arrows bring A hard landing that you deserve VERSE TWO: We loved like doves But we fought like beasts Clawing at what laid beneath Inside our churning hearts Well I guess our challenges were too much Cupid somehow got out of touch And what we had is out of reach BRIDGE 1x: But who is Cupid to know better, if he can't see us through bad weather? We're a job left undone CHORUS 1x VERSE THREE: How we wanted to make it work But there's little love on this cold earth And it's not enough to see us through With no help from the angel of love Our marriage has turned into mud And his arrows have scarred our hearts BRIDGE 1x CHORUS 1x BRIDGE 1x CHORUS 1x BRIDGE 1x Any critiques are appreciated; I'll return the favor. |
04-20-2008, 12:55 PM | #2 (permalink) | |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: My heart is in Ohio
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I love the bridge. [: Good song overall. I love it.
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