My Song (memories, Hang)

stalck me · 03-17-2008, 07:22 PM

please read it and tell me what you think or if maybe i should change some things

Verse 1

You know I love it when you smile

To get to you I’d run for miles

I’d do anything to know you love me too

To fall asleep and wake up with you

I’d hold you in my arms at night

Hearts start beating and it feels so right

Chorus

Hold my hand and my heart takes flight

As we lay together on this starry night

Nothing can go wrong

As we hear our song

And we sing along

To all the words we know

Verse 2

When I see you I think you should know

That I would freeze time or make it go slow

Our time together goes way to fast

Memories of you will always last

Wishing that it will never end

You will always be my greatest friend

Chorus

Hold my hand and my heart takes flight

As we lay together on this starry night

Sometimes things go wrong

So we hear our song

And we sing along

To all the words we know

Verse 3

That perfect smile and those pretty eyes

Shine like the stars in the clear night sky

It’s not the walk it’s the way you talk

Because I know that you care

No one else can compare

Closing

Now that it’s over I had to think things through

Even though we had good times I guess im not right for you

I will always be your friend and hold you if you cry

I will always be there for you till the day I die

Rubber · 03-17-2008, 07:30 PM

....this looks very familiar

stalck me · 03-17-2008, 08:02 PM

its 100% my song completly origonal

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-18-2008, 07:35 PM

If you say so.

Invest in spellcheck.

right-track · 03-18-2008, 07:37 PM

...and a thesaurus*.

*clue: it's not a dinosaur

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-18-2008, 08:11 PM

Pwnt!

03-17-2008, 07:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
stalck me Groupie Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 2	My Song please read it and tell me what you think or if maybe i should change some things Verse 1 You know I love it when you smile To get to you I’d run for miles I’d do anything to know you love me too To fall asleep and wake up with you I’d hold you in my arms at night Hearts start beating and it feels so right Chorus Hold my hand and my heart takes flight As we lay together on this starry night Nothing can go wrong As we hear our song And we sing along To all the words we know Verse 2 When I see you I think you should know That I would freeze time or make it go slow Our time together goes way to fast Memories of you will always last Wishing that it will never end You will always be my greatest friend Chorus Hold my hand and my heart takes flight As we lay together on this starry night Sometimes things go wrong So we hear our song And we sing along To all the words we know Verse 3 That perfect smile and those pretty eyes Shine like the stars in the clear night sky It’s not the walk it’s the way you talk Because I know that you care No one else can compare Closing Now that it’s over I had to think things through Even though we had good times I guess im not right for you I will always be your friend and hold you if you cry I will always be there for you till the day I die

03-17-2008, 07:30 PM	#2 (permalink)
Rubber sidewalks Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Novi Posts: 401	....this looks very familiar __________________ and we stayed, sixteen.

03-17-2008, 08:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
stalck me Groupie Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 2	its 100% my song completly origonal

03-18-2008, 07:37 PM	#5 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	...and a thesaurus. clue: it's not a dinosaur