weifenglee

Hey.. this is a poem.. please comment..

If beauty came in liquid,
You’d have and ocean.
If love came in roses,
I’d give you a thousand.

If there was a word,
Which could describe your beauty.
I’d write you a poem,
With words so many.

If I lived,
Just to see an angel,
Then you should know,
I live for you.

If the things I say,
Are just a lie,
Then so is the sun,
And so is the sky.

If Miss Universe pageants
Were just and fair,
Then you would win,
With lots to spare.

B’coz for how I feel
And how I fare,
You’re the one
I love to share.

I want so much
To show you care,
Because friends like you,
Are just so rare.

sleepy jack

It's kind of cheesy and cliche at times but on some of the verses the amateurness is very charming.

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