"Crescent" (member, song)

Faia · 03-03-2008, 03:56 PM

“Crescent”

The moon is shining bright
the cold air twisting silver
the crescent moon is smooth
watch it move like water in a stream

The dark nights shimmer in the light
The bright days twist into the dark
Reflecting from the stars

Slip away
journey through the vast space
and the moon is streaming for you
into the light

Take away
the craters that refold the light
The crescent moon is gleaming
remembering the days before light

The song isn't finished... I was just bored and decided to make a song and didn't finish it. What does everyone think of it?

sweet_nothing · 03-03-2008, 06:28 PM

I really like the imagery. :{)

Lizzie · 03-04-2008, 07:43 PM

It does sound very unfinished...perhaps you should finish it first?

03-03-2008, 03:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
Faia Groupie Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 4	"Crescent" “Crescent” The moon is shining bright the cold air twisting silver the crescent moon is smooth watch it move like water in a stream The dark nights shimmer in the light The bright days twist into the dark Reflecting from the stars Slip away journey through the vast space and the moon is streaming for you into the light Take away the craters that refold the light The crescent moon is gleaming remembering the days before light The song isn't finished... I was just bored and decided to make a song and didn't finish it. What does everyone think of it?

03-04-2008, 07:43 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lizzie Diskobox Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: vancouver Posts: 660	It does sound very unfinished...perhaps you should finish it first? __________________ white and black, are you looking for the sun boy? the sun doesn't shine down here, no, not in the shadow