Stars (Kiss, hands)

Dizzys in the wolf · 02-16-2008, 05:06 AM

The starry dreams we had
Blew away, in this valentine.
And our reality
Stung sweeter than we'd dreamt.
Take away, all this romance,
And baby I'll be gone.
Take away what I feel for you,
Its like I'd never been born.

This night may never end
But I’d send away the sunsets;
And embrace the moon with open arms
And love you with no regrets.

I'd steal this sky above us
And run like the dreamers before me,
And Pack your bags with my lonely hands,
If you'd only be happy.
And I'd repay you for every star
From my eyes to your lips,
I'd path our way with moonlight
And crown you with this kiss.

Any feedback blah.

let_it_rain · 03-01-2008, 08:23 AM

I like this. It says what it means with just the right amount of poetry. Good job.

02-16-2008, 05:06 AM	#1 (permalink)
Dizzys in the wolf Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 158	Stars The starry dreams we had Blew away, in this valentine. And our reality Stung sweeter than we'd dreamt. Take away, all this romance, And baby I'll be gone. Take away what I feel for you, Its like I'd never been born. This night may never end But I’d send away the sunsets; And embrace the moon with open arms And love you with no regrets. I'd steal this sky above us And run like the dreamers before me, And Pack your bags with my lonely hands, If you'd only be happy. And I'd repay you for every star From my eyes to your lips, I'd path our way with moonlight And crown you with this kiss. Any feedback blah. __________________ There’s something about seeing this city at night Where we can say what we want and do what we like. These streets are empty but we don't feel alone, We can run in the dark and sleep on the roads.

03-01-2008, 08:23 AM	#2 (permalink)
let_it_rain Groupie Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Boston Posts: 6	I like this. It says what it means with just the right amount of poetry. Good job.