da da song (songs)

saraheleven11 · 02-12-2008, 12:44 AM

i would like to see what people think about this song my friend wrote it ad she doesnt believe me when i tell her its pretty good. so i told her i would prove it to her.

I understand how you feel
I understand your point of view
I understand why you made your decision.

CHORUS:
I've listened to your reasons
I've heard the words you spoke
And now i've made my decision
That its time for me to go
I need to pave my own road
I gotta make my own mistakes
You've gotta let me go
It's time to let me go

I want you to know
You have my love and respect
I hope you know i'll always miss you
And that i dont wanna hurt you
But i gotta do whats right for me

Repeat chorus

I know you dont want to
but im begging you please
I need to live my own life
I want to make my own choices
I need you to understand

repeat chorus

Its time to let me go
just let me go

right-track · 02-12-2008, 04:51 AM

I've moved it here for others to critique.
Tell 'your friend' she is welcome to post her songs here in this forum.

GKB116 · 02-12-2008, 07:46 PM

It's okay...it's lacking a little expansive use of the language but it wasn't bad,

02-12-2008, 12:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
saraheleven11 Groupie Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: susanville Posts: 2	da da song i would like to see what people think about this song my friend wrote it ad she doesnt believe me when i tell her its pretty good. so i told her i would prove it to her. I understand how you feel I understand your point of view I understand why you made your decision. CHORUS: I've listened to your reasons I've heard the words you spoke And now i've made my decision That its time for me to go I need to pave my own road I gotta make my own mistakes You've gotta let me go It's time to let me go I want you to know You have my love and respect I hope you know i'll always miss you And that i dont wanna hurt you But i gotta do whats right for me Repeat chorus I know you dont want to but im begging you please I need to live my own life I want to make my own choices I need you to understand repeat chorus Its time to let me go just let me go

02-12-2008, 07:46 PM	#3 (permalink)
GKB116 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 20	It's okay...it's lacking a little expansive use of the language but it wasn't bad, __________________ I'll keep digging...'til I feel something.

02-12-2008, 04:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	I've moved it here for others to critique. Tell 'your friend' she is welcome to post her songs here in this forum.