Where's my World? (song)

boxcarguy07 · 02-08-2008, 09:57 AM

This is a song I just wrote... AUDIO is below

Where's my World?

Nostalgic pieces flow
From the moon.
The morning dove rises

Broken bottles break.
I'll be there soon,
Count on me.

Timeless tears have fall'n away
In front of me,
Basking in their glory

We leave at noon
And sail away
On ever-present circles surrounding me

Before the world was won
There was a healer
Before the bags were packed
You walked in

Inseperable ties
Become undone;
Fractals lose their visual profundity

A feeling on the horizon
It beckons me.
Freckles fall as the sun blinks its eye

Crimeless prisoners
The hunt is on
Their god demands flesh

Carry me way back to the
Lullabye tree.
How I long to hear its sweet singing

Where's the whisper?
Where's my girl?
Deep within the silence
Where's my world?

boxcarguy07 · 02-09-2008, 12:48 AM

Updated:

I recorded it, so there's audio now.
Please take a listen and give me any critiques you may have.

Thanks!

AUDIO:
Where's My World?

02-08-2008, 09:57 AM	#1 (permalink)
boxcarguy07 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 24	Where's my World? This is a song I just wrote... AUDIO is below Where's my World? Nostalgic pieces flow From the moon. The morning dove rises Broken bottles break. I'll be there soon, Count on me. Timeless tears have fall'n away In front of me, Basking in their glory We leave at noon And sail away On ever-present circles surrounding me Before the world was won There was a healer Before the bags were packed You walked in Inseperable ties Become undone; Fractals lose their visual profundity A feeling on the horizon It beckons me. Freckles fall as the sun blinks its eye Crimeless prisoners The hunt is on Their god demands flesh Carry me way back to the Lullabye tree. How I long to hear its sweet singing Where's the whisper? Where's my girl? Deep within the silence Where's my world? Last edited by boxcarguy07; 02-09-2008 at 12:31 PM.

02-09-2008, 12:48 AM	#2 (permalink)
boxcarguy07 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 24	Updated: I recorded it, so there's audio now. Please take a listen and give me any critiques you may have. Thanks! AUDIO: Where's My World?