boxcarguy07

AUDIO - Invitation to Infinite

Hey all...
okay, this recording is nowhere even close to complete... it's not even the whole song.
The singing is a bit off-key and and timing isn't worked out perfectly yet. So fair warning! :-)


But I am offering this recording unto you in hopes of attaining your feedback as to whether you think this is song is going anywhere or not.

Thanks!


Lyrics:

Last year feels closer than a month ago
Calindrical time knows nothing of what I know
The highest tiers bow down before the ebb and flow
Which stays a while, only to see the seasons go

So swim with me in circles
Tilt you head back
And let each drop flow down each strand
And return to the ocean’s hand

Last year was a child I held so dear
Let go too soon, only to see it fall

The month was a bow that broke its fall
Launched it up to the sky where it could see all

He smiles down cuz he knows of the perfect plan
He sees everything return to the great I Am.

He sees humans join with highways
And I can’t help but sing as I merge with everything

So swim with me in circles
Tilt you head back
And let each drop flow down each strand
And return to the ocean’s hand

Some move slower than the others
But we all get there in the end

Some think of us as lovers
But I think of you as friend

I’m ecstatic on this highway
As it starts to go downhill

We’re closing in upon our exit, do you
Want to stay? I think I will.

So swim with me in circles
Tilt you head back
And let each drop flow down each strand
And return to the ocean’s hand

under

i like how theres an audio to it. but its not really one of my favorite ways that someone could sing.

The Unfan

Song: Not bad, my only complaints are ones you had yourself. I'm sure you're capable of fixing up the timing and such.

Recording: Center the keyboards a bit more, lower the vocals in the mix, use a windscreen when recording vocals, and record directly in instead of mic-ing the acoustics.