I get older everytime (song, Ching)

Jadix · 01-08-2008, 02:39 PM

I flew all alone on an airplane
Gazing at the safety out the window
As children cried wishing they were at home
I wondered if I should call her on the airphone

I sat down with her at a table
Searching out the window for an answer
Surrounded by the sound of fake laughter
I wondered of the motives she was after

I stood there stranded on a grass hill
Staring at the people past her shoulder
Knowing its the last time that i'll hold her
And suddenly I felt a little older

CHORUS:
When that women comes around
I find myself speaking aloud
All the thoughts I know will get me nowhere
I can never understand
Why I stand the game at hand
When everytime I play I get older

'Cause everytime I play I grow older

Jadix · 01-17-2008, 11:01 AM

nada eh?

Jadix · 01-31-2008, 06:04 PM

100+ and nothing.

enemyat_thesix · 02-01-2008, 04:38 PM

i like the third stanza all right; the second is very awkward; in the first "airphone" seems a tad cheesy

i like the last two lines and overall idea of the chorus

that's all I have to say.

Jadix · 02-03-2008, 03:24 PM

cool thanks

Dizzys in the wolf · 02-03-2008, 04:04 PM

Growing up and older is a really important topic for me, and I touch on it a lot. Its cool to see someone else talking about it as well. I liked it, I didn't really like the first stanza though. But its a good song

01-08-2008, 02:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	I get older everytime I flew all alone on an airplane Gazing at the safety out the window As children cried wishing they were at home I wondered if I should call her on the airphone I sat down with her at a table Searching out the window for an answer Surrounded by the sound of fake laughter I wondered of the motives she was after I stood there stranded on a grass hill Staring at the people past her shoulder Knowing its the last time that i'll hold her And suddenly I felt a little older CHORUS: When that women comes around I find myself speaking aloud All the thoughts I know will get me nowhere I can never understand Why I stand the game at hand When everytime I play I get older 'Cause everytime I play I grow older Last edited by Jadix; 01-10-2008 at 10:50 AM.

02-03-2008, 04:04 PM	#6 (permalink)
Dizzys in the wolf Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 158	Growing up and older is a really important topic for me, and I touch on it a lot. Its cool to see someone else talking about it as well. I liked it, I didn't really like the first stanza though. But its a good song __________________ There’s something about seeing this city at night Where we can say what we want and do what we like. These streets are empty but we don't feel alone, We can run in the dark and sleep on the roads.

01-17-2008, 11:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	nada eh?

01-31-2008, 06:04 PM	#3 (permalink)
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	100+ and nothing.

02-03-2008, 03:24 PM	#5 (permalink)
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	cool thanks