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01-05-2008, 06:03 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: London-UK
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He's Had
As I'm new to this forum I thought for my first post I would post a song I wrote at the end of last year ...
HE'S HAD... V1 He's got glazed eyes and a frozen frown A half empty glass that he cant put down With last weeks locals on the soles of his feet He sits there cold without a sound Chours He's had a hard life and nothing to show for it Just another forgotten soul with nowhere to go He's had a hard life that you can see Life is been like a prison and he wants to break free V2 A half burnt candle is his only light A pair of folded glasses on a family album Faded pictures just sit on the side layered in dust of time gone by Chours Bridge V3 His hand on his lap falls down to his side A tarnished ring slips from a finger Now's there's no more memories to say goodbye to As he takes his last breath without a sigh Chours X2 Life is like a prison and now he's free... All comments good or bad are welcome.... |
01-06-2008, 03:41 AM | #4 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 58
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Doesnt seem to mean much, just a bunch of words put together, trying to sound poetic...sorry
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