Bronze Leaves (effect, classic, Guitars)

Crowe · 12-22-2007, 05:54 PM

I like this alot Phap. Not a lot of masturbatory description going on here, it's simple. It's elegant IN its simplicity. I like the contrast of the appreciation of the beauty in a town that you may not enjoy so much. I like being thrown for a loop when you mention something out of nature in the midst of your praise of the autumnal colors (the volvos specifically). This is more of a classic sort of poem -- very nice!

12-22-2007, 05:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 690	I like this alot Phap. Not a lot of masturbatory description going on here, it's simple. It's elegant IN its simplicity. I like the contrast of the appreciation of the beauty in a town that you may not enjoy so much. I like being thrown for a loop when you mention something out of nature in the midst of your praise of the autumnal colors (the volvos specifically). This is more of a classic sort of poem -- very nice! __________________