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Old 12-21-2007, 08:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Something Real

One of the first lyrics I've written.
Please give me pointers on how to make this better(:

[Verse 1]
Sitting at home, thinking of you
I wish you were here tonight.
I want you to know what I would do for you
I just want to hold you tight.

So you'll know

[Verse 2]
Laying in bed, I want to sleep
So I can see you in my dreams.
Never wanting to wake up
Don't want to face reality.

I wish you'd know

[Chorus]
Doesn't matter if it is
Day or night
Dark or light
You will always complete me.

You shine so bright
All through the night
You are the girl of my dreams.

If I had that
One chance
To say how I feel
I hope you
Know that
This is something real.

[Verse 3]
Texting calling talking to you
Means so much to me.
I want to say, I love you
And hear you say it back to me.

So I know

[Verse 4]
Looking at you, I feel different
It's like nobody is around.
Wanting to say the right thing
So I don't feel like a clown

One day you'll see

[Chorus]
Doesn't matter if it is
Day or night
Dark or light
You will always complete me.

You shine so bright
All through the night
You are the girl of my dreams.

If I had that
One chance
To say how I feel
I hope you
Know that
This is something real.
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