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12-15-2007, 05:32 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 4
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Mutilated Society
Mutilated Society
Verse One Now it’s time to make all of ya realize We are the sickness to finalize your demise What are you gonna do when your lies rely On that flesh disguise that you call life Now it's time to bite the dust Stricken to hell by the god you trust Just remember how you ****ed UP!!!! MUTILATED BY THIS ANARCHY CONFINED BY THE MARQUEE OF THE PLAGUE THAT YOU BREATHE LIBERATE DEMOCRACY THE TIME FOR MERCY CEASES TO EXIST!!! Chorus THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE THIS IS A MUTLIATED SOCIETY!!! THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE THIS IS A MUTILATED SOCIETY!!! Verse Two That’s enough with this masquerade Your constant complaining is making me irate Stupid mother****er, keep falling for my bait It won’t be long until you get graved This is a game of pain and precision The hate has viciously risen Lips are bitten, the blood spills Time to get full of CHILLS!!! RESISTANCE IS FUTILE JUDGE, JURY AND EXECUTIONER, WALK THE GREEN MILE THE SKIN PEELING IS GETTING VILE CAN’T YOU ****ING SEE? THIS IS THE RISE OF A MAGGOT SOCIETY!!! Chorus THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE THIS IS A MUTLIATED SOCIETY!!! THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE THIS IS A MUTILATED SOCIETY!!! Harmonic Outro All I wanted was something to feel This is nowhere close to real I can’t make it real So I’ll just wait and eventually bleed.. All I wanted was something to feel This is nowhere close to real I can’t make it real So I’ll just wait and eventually bleed.. TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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12-16-2007, 09:11 PM
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isfckingdead
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 18,967
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Well I can feel you on one thing in here, your constant complaining is making me irate.
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12-16-2007, 10:42 PM
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Ad Astra
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 730
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If I were pro-angsty metal lyrics, I'd say this isn't half bad. I reccommend keeping the style, losing some angst, and staying away from using ideas Corey Taylor throws into most of his songs. It is obvious you are heavily influenced by SlipKnot.
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12-17-2007, 12:59 PM
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Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Somewhere in the U.S
Posts: 400
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i agree, if i was into the hard metal/ kinda emo stuff i think it would be a good lyric.. it just seems like your bitching instead of singing...
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A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit |
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