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12-07-2007, 01:11 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Tear-stained Eyes
You sitting there in their pain
Tearing at your veins Breaking skin on your cold wrist Clenching your blood-stained fist Pain is flowing in your nerves But you know its' what you deserve Fills the air with writhing cries Staring through your tear-stained eyes. Last edited by ma/chem/rom; 12-07-2007 at 01:19 AM. |
12-07-2007, 02:28 PM | #4 (permalink) |
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uhm, i suggest starting over...
this is honestly so bad i want to cry
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12-07-2007, 03:50 PM | #5 (permalink) |
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Conveniently this songs purpose seems to be to make people want to cry.
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12-08-2007, 03:23 PM | #8 (permalink) |
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Blatant flaming is becoming more than tolerable on this forum, it seems. However, I agree whole heartedly. The nursery rhyming completely throws out any good qualities of this work, (which there were none either way), and it's entirely too emo.
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