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Old 12-08-2007, 01:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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You force your lifestyle in me, but there is no chance in success

this dimming light in my life has caused something to happen,
i cant conrtol where i go,
or what i tend to see.
why would you want to control it?
why would you need to approve of what i do or where i go?

giving me a call on something so futile,
is like little kids trying to tell you something,
that really isn't as important.

its my life that you seem to be controlling for me,
and its not working for me.
you make me feel pain and misery,
even when i dont need it.

you get me at my worst times,
especially when im in a state,
where i become an easy target.

so one question.
is it fun for you?
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