Take It To The Grave - give a listen and let me know, thanks (lyrics, cds)

Patient Dreams · 12-01-2007, 07:45 AM

There’s times when you think you’ve just had enough. Songs just a descriptive feeling. Give a listen and drop a line if you want. Any feedback is appreciated.

Take It To The Grave

@ Lyneva Starbuck 10-21-07
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080

Your eyes tell a story
Your lips may never say
You can only hide the truth so long
It’ll come back for you one day

You’re looking on the outside
As another page is turned
Still you search for the next best thing
With all the paths you burn

So you can take it to the grave
All the things you can never say
Were no one could ever hear
All your thoughts now coming true
With so much you want to do
The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave

You’ll hear the words I’ll say
And go on with no blame
You’ll live your lies, and die with truth
Without feeling any shame

You’re looking on the outside
As another page is turned
Still you search for the next best thing
With all the paths you burn

So you can take it to the grave
All the things you can never say
Were no one could ever hear
All your thoughts now coming true
With so much you want to do
The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave

Thanks for the read. Give a listen
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080

Dizzys in the wolf · 12-01-2007, 08:52 AM

I dunno, pretty good sound but I don't really like the vocals. It sounds a bit Team America. The guitar solo doesn't really work either, but I like the drums.

TheCaster · 12-03-2007, 09:42 PM

uhmm

yeah the vocals suck, i thought the guitar was OK but couldv ebeen better

HotPlop · 12-03-2007, 09:55 PM

Wasn't very interesting. Honestly, I could go to the local exchange and grab ten cds full of this kind of stuff for under 5 bucks.

The vocals and the guitar weren't very moving or challenging. They congealed a bit. Same goes for the lyrics, I suppose.

Er, uh...no offense. Just being honest.

Patient Dreams · 12-10-2007, 02:16 PM

Well none the less thanks for the reviews and replies. This was kind of an experiment, maybe gone a rye. Thanks though.

Ace · 12-10-2007, 07:48 PM

Lyrics need a little work. I liked the direction they're going in, though.
I'll have a listen sometime in the near future.

Patient Dreams · 12-26-2007, 06:57 AM

Thanks for the read. Hope you get a chance to listen.

~~under~~ · 12-26-2007, 12:48 PM

eh, the vocals aren't really that satisfying. it makes it seem like you aren't serious when your singing. not really a good thing. nice try though because the lyrics are...a bit off. i like the drums as well. great beats.

sleepy jack · 12-26-2007, 04:57 PM

Doesn't this share a title with a Fall Out Boy song? and lyrics too for that matter?

~~under~~ · 12-26-2007, 05:19 PM

Take This To Your Grave was a fall out boy album in 2003. not sure about the lyrics though.

12-01-2007, 07:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
Patient Dreams Groupie Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 23	Take It To The Grave - give a listen and let me know, thanks There’s times when you think you’ve just had enough. Songs just a descriptive feeling. Give a listen and drop a line if you want. Any feedback is appreciated. Take It To The Grave @ Lyneva Starbuck 10-21-07 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080 Your eyes tell a story Your lips may never say You can only hide the truth so long It’ll come back for you one day You’re looking on the outside As another page is turned Still you search for the next best thing With all the paths you burn So you can take it to the grave All the things you can never say Were no one could ever hear All your thoughts now coming true With so much you want to do The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave You’ll hear the words I’ll say And go on with no blame You’ll live your lies, and die with truth Without feeling any shame You’re looking on the outside As another page is turned Still you search for the next best thing With all the paths you burn So you can take it to the grave All the things you can never say Were no one could ever hear All your thoughts now coming true With so much you want to do The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave Thanks for the read. Give a listen http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080 __________________ LIVE LIKE THERE'S NO TOMARROW www.soundclick.com/patientdreams

12-01-2007, 08:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
Dizzys in the wolf Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 158	I dunno, pretty good sound but I don't really like the vocals. It sounds a bit Team America. The guitar solo doesn't really work either, but I like the drums. __________________ There’s something about seeing this city at night Where we can say what we want and do what we like. These streets are empty but we don't feel alone, We can run in the dark and sleep on the roads.

12-03-2007, 09:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	uhmm yeah the vocals suck, i thought the guitar was OK but couldv ebeen better __________________ A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit

12-10-2007, 02:16 PM	#5 (permalink)
Patient Dreams Groupie Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 23	Well none the less thanks for the reviews and replies. This was kind of an experiment, maybe gone a rye. Thanks though. __________________ LIVE LIKE THERE'S NO TOMARROW www.soundclick.com/patientdreams

12-26-2007, 06:57 AM	#7 (permalink)
Patient Dreams Groupie Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 23	Thanks for the read. Hope you get a chance to listen. __________________ LIVE LIKE THERE'S NO TOMARROW www.soundclick.com/patientdreams

12-03-2007, 09:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
HotPlop Groupie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 4	Wasn't very interesting. Honestly, I could go to the local exchange and grab ten cds full of this kind of stuff for under 5 bucks. The vocals and the guitar weren't very moving or challenging. They congealed a bit. Same goes for the lyrics, I suppose. Er, uh...no offense. Just being honest.

12-26-2007, 12:48 PM	#8 (permalink)
~~under~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,056	eh, the vocals aren't really that satisfying. it makes it seem like you aren't serious when your singing. not really a good thing. nice try though because the lyrics are...a bit off. i like the drums as well. great beats.

12-26-2007, 05:19 PM	#10 (permalink)
~~under~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,056	Take This To Your Grave was a fall out boy album in 2003. not sure about the lyrics though.