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11-28-2007, 02:51 PM | #1 (permalink) |
They call me Tundra Boy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
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Deidre's Casebook #839
My girlfriend
My girlfriend turned to me She looked me deep in the eye And said without irony "If I died If I died If I died tomorrow If I died before you Would you have sex with my corpse? Would you have sex with my corpse? Would you have sex with my corpse? You could turn the lights out, of course" I looked at her With a tinge of horror And said "no" I said "no" Then she turned away And crossed her arms Saying "each day that passes we are closer to dying Getting old is a lingering death With each day that passes I am nearing the grave Does this mean that each day you fancy me less?" In a bid to console her I told her I told her "As you get older, you'll turn out like your mother And I think your mother is really foxy I'd definitely have sex with her" But that didn't seem to help |
11-28-2007, 06:12 PM | #2 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
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Good, but the repetition is really annoying and doesn't add anything, to me. I liked it though.
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